This is actually my first story I'm doing soo please all of the experts at writing please give some tips on making the story better!! I would appreciate it!! ^^
Hey, Author-nim. I'm admin Suho!
Our House is a facebook RP focused on settling down and starting a family. I started this place because I found my match at a rp that wouldn't allow marriage, so we moved away. If you want to get married and have a life of your own, bring your significant other and join up!
There will be games and events where you can earn RP currency. Check out our Tumblr for more info. http://ourhouserp.tumblr.com/
Waah~ I finally get to read it^^
I agree with @InfinitlyShinee, it would have been really cute if it was longer, I would have kept reading^^
For your first fic it was pretty good :) Just needed a little more detail is all.
Great job by the way, I hope you write more^^
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