Insomnia

Description

Everything was perfect until Myungsoo left. Then everything went wrong. Sungyeol could only spend nights waiting for his love to return and things to go back to normal. If they would ever go back to normal that is.

 

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Foreword

Preview:

All I know is one day we were sitting together on the lopsided bench in the park down the street, laughing and kissing and loving and exchanging promises of still being one even when our hair starts to turn grey and the next he was taking down curtains and pulling apart our connection from the inside out, ripping it like paper.

 

An angsty Myungyeol oneshot!

Because everyone needs more angst in their lives. :D

My second fic here. Hope you liek eet.

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Sumayeol #1
Chapter 1: Thisis good for sure
elisaexplosive #2
Chapter 1: Yes! I reread this again and again and again!
Such a great oneshot ♥
Ero-chibi #3
Chapter 1: Sweet! This is one nicely written piece. I particularly loved how you wrote Sungyeol's POV. You can definitely feel the desperation and longing. It beautifully highlights their love for each other. And it seems the feeling is mutual based on Myung's POV. I'm intrigued with the curtains though. what does it symbolizes?
kikuchannie #4
youre writing is great.nice fic! :D
start-to-finish #5
I like it :) Your descriptions in the beginning are very good, which is cool because most fics I see on here are completely lacking in imagery like that. (On to the sequel! :D)

(I like the first person section better than the third though >.< 3rd person present tense just sometimes seems...odd. Idk)
AtomicSalmon #6
Your story is really excellent and it's so sad. You're good at writing! Do write more! Thank goodness you made a sequel, I shall go and read it now, and hopefully it isn't about him dying, since the title is "recovery" it shouldn't :) right?
notz917 #7
goshh..
what did youu do to myungyeol??

please save yeollie
*puppyeyes*

make sequel please..
love your story plot so much. xoxo. kkk
fmaXp3rt #8
god i hate you. i dont even know the characters and this story is amazing. i dont think i've seen you working on this one. and i see you went on mass insomnia and falling research lol

wth am i supposed to crit if i cant find anything you stupid buffalo!?
Dezzling #9
It's beautifully written TT^TT
MInd for a sequel?Please?Please?Please? OwO
elisaexplosive #10
Sounds interesting indeed! Update soon!
I just love Myungyeol and angst! ♥
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