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Fell for an ELF

 

Belle’s POV

“Oppas, I want to introduce, my bestfriend, Belle!” Maddie started as soon as the car started to move

“A-a-annyeonghasaeyo! Belle-imnida!” I shyly introduced

Seriously!!! I’m definitely shy because the first SJ member that made contact with me is no other than my bias, Minnie oppa!!!

“Ah~ Annyeong!” Minnie oppa replied with a smile

OMO!!! Please stop that~ If only you knew how many times I prayed and dreamt of meeting you in person~

“Uhmm… A-a-annyeong~” Hee oppa stuttered greeted with a smile

YAH!!! Oppa~ when did you become this formal to other people??? There’s something going on with you, oppa! Do you have a problem??? AISH!!! I should not interfere~

Soon, everyone started greeting me

“Oppas! Where are we going?” Maddie suddenly asked

“Uhmm… Do you know a place where it’s kinda fresh? But not so crowded?” Teukie oppa asked

Hmm… kinda fresh~ Not so crowded~ *light bulb*

“How about in Quezon Memorial Circle?” I asked, unsure if they’d agree

Quezon Memorial Circle~

“Belle’s right, oppas!!! Let’s go to Circle!” Maddie agreed

“Circle? What is that?” Sungmin oppa asked

“It’s a park~ Many people go there but they have their own businesses so, we’ll be safe there rather than going to the mall or other crowded places~” I explained with a smile

“Ohh~ Let’s go there!!!” Henry oppa exclaimed

OMO! Henry oppa~ I didn’t know you had this wild and cuter side of yours! But even though you’re cute, for me, Sungmin oppa is still the cutest~ hahaha biased much~

-end of Belle’s POV-

 

Soon, they all arrived in Circle~

“Maddie-ah! Is there a restroom here?” Hangeng asked

“Of course, oppa!!! It’s over there~” MAddie chuckled as she points to a small building

“Oh~ Thank You!” Hangeng exclaimed as he run towards it followed by the other members

All the members left except for Kyu, Hae, Min and Hee~

“Oppas, aren’t you going to follow them?” Maddie asked

“We’ll follow later~ But for now, we’ll keep you company~” Donghae said with a sweet smile

‘OH PLEASE!!! Stop that, oppa! It’s killing me~’ Maddie thought as she looks away

Soon everybody came back and the 4 left went and changed

“Let’s go there!” Leeteuk said as he points at a big tree

Everyone agreed and followed their dear leader

Maddie was supposed to sit at the grass but a hand stopped her~

“Wait~” Donghae said as he takes off his jacket and lays it on the grass

“There~ You can sit now!” Donghae said with a cute smile as he sits

“Thanks, oppa~” Maddie thanked as she sits beside him

“No problem~” Donghae replied

“I’m kinda thirsty~ I’ll just buy something, oppas! I’ll be right back~” Belle said as she starts to walk

“Wait! I’ll come with you~” Sungmin volunteered as he stands up and walks beside her

“Uhm… I’m also t-t-thirsty~ I’ll come too!” Heechul said as he stands up and walks to them

‘Weird~ Hee just drank almost 4-5 bottles of mineral water a while ago! Is it that hot here, in the Philippines, that he needs to drink more than 5 bottles of water??? I mean it’s not that I’m disallowing him to drink water but… it’s just weird~” Leeteuk thought as he watches the 3 of them walk away

 

 

 

Heechul’s POV

Aish!!! What am I doing? THIRSTY?? WTH am I talking about??? I just drank almost a gallon of water a while ago~ What is happening to me??? I’m not really my normal self, right now~ I just feel w---

“I’ll pay for it” Sungmin said as he stops Belle from getting money from her wallet

WTH?! Sungmin’s gonna pay for the water??? Do you like her, LEE SUNGMIN??? Is he paying for it to get her heart??? PAYING FOR A SIMPLE MINERAL WATER?! Oh No~ I won’t let you!!! Wait~ What??!! WTH did I just say? Something’s wrong with me~ I mean something’s DEFINITELY wrong with me!!!

“Oppa~ Aren’t you going to buy water?” Belle asked me

“Oh~ Sorry! Can I please have a bottled water? Just the small one~” I told the ahjumma

“Sungmin-ah!” I called and he quickly looked at me

“Since, you paid for Belle-ssi’s drink, might as well pay for mine?” I said as I wiggled my eyebrows

“WHAT?! Pay for yourself, hyung! You have your own money~” Sungmin protested

“So, you mean… Belle-ssi doesn’t have her own money?” I asked as a smirk formed

“A-a-ani~ It’s just t-t-tha…” Sungmin stuttered

BINGO!!! You like her don’t you?! I knew it!!! Well, then goodluck my dear brother ‘coz I won’t go easy on you~ WHAT?! Go easy??? WTH am I saying???!!! Did I eat something rotten or what??? AISH!!! This is so frustrating~

“That?” I prodded, still with that famous smirk of mine

“…that… AISH!!! Fine! I’ll pay for yours too~” He exclaimed as he hands the ahjumma some money

Hahaha Can’t finish the sentence, Minnie??? Want me to finish it for you? You treated her because YOU! LIKE! HER!!!!!!!!!! AISH!!! Why do I even care?

“You two are so cute~” Belle said with a chuckle

“I’m cuter~” Sungmin confidently said

“But I’m prettier~” I fought back

HAH!!! In your face, BUNNY!!! Sometimes, you should also be mean to your dongsaengs~ kekeke

Belle laughed and walked ahead, leaving me and Sungmin behind~

“You owe me, hyung~” Sungmin whispered as he catches up with Belle

I don’t owe you~ You owe me! I’m letting you pass this time since you paid for my drink!!! But, I won’t hold back next time~

 I opened the bottled water and took a sip then, watered the plants using the remaining water~

Ahhh~ You’re such a genius, KIM HEECHUL!!!

And with that, I walked back to where the group was~

-end of Heechul’s POV-

 

Leeteuk’s POV

I saw Sungmin and Belle walking towards us~ But… where is Heechul?

“Where’s Heechul?” I asked, worried

“He was behind us a while ago~” Sungmin answered as they look back

AISH!!! Where is that guy???

“How if he’s lost?” Belle asked, attempting to go and look for him but Sungmin stopped her

Ohhhhhh~ I sense something’s up~

“Don’t worry about hyung~ He’s always like that~ He’s probably behind those trees and watching you fall for his prank~ And he’s old enough to get lost!” Sungmin said as he pulls her to sit on the grass

But before Belle can sit, a voice suddenly popped

“What’s up?! Did I miss something?” Heechul exlclaimed while carrying a small Cinderella chair

(here's the chair!!! Just imagine it's plastic~ ok? thanks!)

WTH?! Where did he get that??? Is he that conscious to his clothes that he even bought a chair for him to sit on~ Is it that hard to simply sit on this fresh grash??? Heechul never fails to make me gooooooo CRAZY!!!

“Hyung!!! Where did you get that?” Wookie asked

“Somewhere over the rainbow~” He wittily answered

AISH!!! He’s really nuts!!! Did he eat something weird that made him become like this??? I hate to say this but I want the old Heechul back~ The one who always pull pranks on me, teases me, disrespects me, loves me but most of all THE COOL HEECHUL!!!

“Hyung!!! What are you going to do with that?” Henry asked

“Of course, I’d sit on it!!! What do you think I’d be doing with this? Do you think I’ll stand on it then jump like a crazy man? I’m not crazy, you know!” He replied with a ‘duh’ tone that made everyone laugh to death

“But you’re already crazy~” Hangeng said that made everyone laugh

Belle was already going to sit when…

“Belle-ssi, please use this~” Heechul said as he offers the chair for her to sit

OH MY GOSH!!! What happened to my baby HEE??? When did he become this caring to girls aside from his mother, sister and all the girls close to him~ I mean they’re not close yet, but he treats her like how she treats her mother and sister! I glanced at Sungmin and saw his jealous eyes~ Aww… Do you happen to like her too, dongsaeng???  I smell something fishy~ Oh! WAIT~ Donghae’s here~ LOL keke

-end of Leeteuk’s POV-

 

Belle’s POV

“Belle-ssi, please use this~” Hee oppa said as he offers the chair to me

OMO!!! Why is he so caring?! Oppa, if you just only knew… you are my 2nd bias~ I’m so happy right now!!! First, I met Super Junior! Second, Sungmin oppa treated me! LOL Third, Hee oppa offered his chair to me~ Ahhh…. Am I dying soon??? Why am I supposed to receive these kinds of things???

I happily accepted the chair and sat on it~

“Thank You, oppa~” I thanked as I happily smiled at him

“It’s nothing~” Hee oppa replied as he sat on the grass

Now I look like a queen sitting in her throne with her servants sitting at the floor waiting for her orders~ But how come my king is sitting on the grass too???

I glanced at Sungmin oppa…. O_______O

Am I dreaming or what??? I can perfectly see the jealousness in his eyes~ Is he jealous because Hee oppa gave me a chair to sit on??? Aww… Sungmin oppa’s jealous~ WAIT!!! WHAT?! Oh~ Please! Stop dreaming, girl~ You think he’s JEALOUS?! Tsk!!! Only a stupid girl like you would ever think that he is jealous~ Stop it!!! You’re just bringing your hopes up!!!

-end of Belle’s POV-

 

Meanwhile with KyuMaHae~

 

Kyuhyun’s POV

I was fixing my shirt while walking to where the others are when I saw Donghae hyung taking off his jacket and placing it on the grass~

YAH!!! Hyung!!! What do you think you’re doing??? Stealing my girl??? Forget that I even said that~ I’ll let you for now, hyung…

I sat beside Maddie and watched every move they do~

Yeah~ I may look and sound like a stalker but I don’t know~ There’s this part of me that hurts when they’re together! I feel like it’s being stabbed by knives~ *unconsciously placed my hand above my chest*

“Oppa! Are you alright?” Maddie asked, worried

Wait! Did she hea---- OH!!!

“Ah~ I’m fine!” I answered as I remove my hand

“Oh, ok~ Tell me if you’re not feeling well, arraso?” She replied with her sweet smile

Just by seeing your sweet smile, I feel like everything is alright~ Please smile more often! You’re prettier~

After some minutes of talking and laughing, I glanced at Maddie~

I saw her smiling with her arms wrapped around her slim body~

She’s probably cold~ I mean she’s still wearing her pink dress! Even though I’m wearing a blazer, I can still feel the coldness tonight! How more on her part? Aish~ This girl is really different~ She’s UNIQUE! She never fail to make me smile, go crazy, worried and most of all make my heart beat like crazy~

I took off my blazer and wrapped it around her~ Of course, she’d be shock!

“O-oh~ Kumowo, oppa!” She told me with a warm smile that melted my heart

I’m glad that I finally made something for her~ kekeke In your face, Donghae hyung~ MWAHAHAHAHA

After maybe… 5 minutes? I think~

I glanced at her again~ She was busy rubbing her hands together~

Aish!!! How come it’s so cold tonight? It was not this cold the past nights?? Maybe this is FATE?! Bringing me and Maddie closer~ MWAHAHAHAHA I’m so smart~

I pulled her cold hands and secured them with my warm hands~

I don’t know but… I think her hands just fit perfectly with mine?!

“O-o-oppa~?” she asked, shocked

“I know you’re cold~ Just enjoy my warm hands! I know you’ve been wanting to hold them ever since~” I while holding her soft hands

“Yah! You’re mean, oppa!” she exclaimed as she pulls her hands from me

“I was just kidding~ I know you’re cold, just let me warm your hands, arraso?” I said as I secure her hands again

“Kumowo~” she simply said with her head bowed down

Hmm… probably blushing~ kekeke KYU-2, HAE-1 mwahahaha

-end of Kyuhyun’s POV-

 

Donghae’s POV

AISH!!! Kyu scored again!!! I need to do something for Maddie~ Or else… I’ll probably LOSE!

I saw Kyu wrap his blazer around Maddie’s shoulders~

AISH!!! I need to do something for her~

I glanced at her again, I saw her rub her hands~

AHA!!! Wait~ I’ll hold her hands!!!

I was already on the process of getting her hands when... someone held my shoulders~ WTH?!

“Isn’t Heechul hyung, sweet?” Wookie exclaimed as he stares at Hee hyung who’s offering Belle a sit

“And aren’t you such a good dongsaeng?!” I sarcastically said

“Really,hyung? Kumowo~” Wookie happily replied

Can’t he feel my sarcasm there??? AISH!!!! WOOKIE~

I glanced back to Maddie~ Only to see Kyu securing her hands with his!

GREAT! Just great~ Now what should I do? I need to do something for Maddie!!!

-end of Donghae’s POV-

 

“Guys! Listen, I want to ask something~” Leeteuk started

“What is it, hyung?” Yesung asked and everybody went silent

“Well, I want to ask a favor~” Leeteuk said, shy

“Oh~ Is that so, hyung? Go ahead and tell us~” Zhoumi said with a smile

“Anything for our dear leader~” Hangeng swettly said with matching wink~

“Well, it’s actually for Maddie and Belle~” Leeteuk explained with a smile

“Oh! For us? Sure, oppa! What is it?” Maddie asked

“You see, we still have many remaining days here…” Leeteuk started

“Really? Then…?” Maddie prodded

“Can you please tour us?” Leeteuk asked with pleading eyes

“Tour you?” Belle asked and Leeteuk nodded

“Sure! But where do you want to go?” Maddie asked with a smile

“Well… you see~ We want to see the Philippines more… so can we also go to Visayas and Mindanao? Did I say it right?” Leeteuk replied with cute smile

“VISAYAS AND MINDANAO???!!!” Maddie and Belle asked due to shockness

“Uhmm… yes? Is there anything wrong?” Leeteuk nervously asked

“Well… you see, oppas~ Visayas and Mindanao are two of the three major Philippine island groups~ We are currently in Luzon~ It’s also one of the major groups~” Maddie started to explain

“And…” they (SuJu) all asked in unison

“…and to get there…” Belle continued while they (SuJu) listened intently

“We need to ride on a plane or a ship to get there~” Maddie finished

“What’s the problem there? It would be more fun to ride on a ship or a plane~” Yesung said with a smile

“You don’t get it, oppa~” Maddie sadly said

“What is the pro---~” Henry was supposed to say something when Leeteuk interrupted him

“Are worrying about the expenses?” Leeteuk asked which made Maddie and Belle shyly nod

All members laughed~

“What’s funny, oppas?” Maddie and Belle asked in unison, they were both confused

‘Nothing’s funny right?!’ Belle thought

‘Did we do or say something funny? I think not~ We were serious all along!’ Maddie thought

“You’re worrying because of the expenses?!” Yesung asked but more on like ‘teasing’ and everyone roared in laughter again

‘They’re teasing them~ Ohhh… this is now my chance!!! YAY!!!’ Donghae thought

“Yah!!! Stop it!!! They don’t get it, ok?” Donghae exclaimed while swinging his arm around Maddie’s shoulders

“Ohh~” they (SuJu) all teased in unison

“You see, Maddie-ah and Belle-ah~ Don’t worry about the money because we’ll take care of it~ You’re the one who’s going to tour us so, we’ll pay for everything. So, cheer up~ Arraso?” Donghae explained with a smile

‘MWAHAHAHAHA See this, Kyu?! HAHAHA I’m such a smart fish~ HAE-2; KYU-2! Ha! It’s a tie~ Let’s see who’ll win today~’ Donghae thought with a smirk

“Oh?! But isn’t it too much, oppas?” Maddie asked, shocked

“Ani~ It’s just a part of our ‘thank you’ to you~” Heechul popped as he swung his arm around Belle’s shoulders

“But why include me? I’ll definitely understand Maddie’s part~ But why me?” Belle asked, confused

‘Because you turned me into someone I, nor my dear brothers expect me to be~’ Heechul thought

‘Because you saved my lonely heart~’ Sungmin thought

“Because you’re Maddie’s best friend~ And besides, take this as our congratulatory gift to the two of you~ So, is that a ‘yes’?” Leeteuk asked

“YES!!!” Maddie and Belle exclaimed in unison which made everyone leap for joy~

“So when do we start the tour?” Zhoumi asked, excited

“Hmm… Let’s first explore Luzon~ Since we’re already here! Let’s go to the famous places here, in Luzon~” Maddie explained as she pretends to think

“Where do you think should we first go?” Maddie asked

“Molla~ We don’t know any place here! You’re the ones who live here~ Why ask us?!” Kyuhyun suddenly replied with a smirk

“AISH!!! You’re sometimes annoying, oppa~” Maddie replied as she rolls her eyes

“I’m not called Evil Maknae for no reason~” Kyuhyun teased, still with that smirk of his

“AISH!!! Mababaliw na ako dahil sa’yo~ (I’m going crazy because of you~)” Maddie exclaimed

“What does that mean?” Kyuhyun asked

‘HAH! In your face~ LOL He can sometimes be annoying~ And I can sometimes be EVIL like him~’ Maddie thought

“Talaga? Eh matagal ka naman nang baliw na baliw sa kanya eh~ (Really? But you’ve been crazy for him for a long time already~)” Belle suddenly teased

“YAH!!! Pasalamat ka at hindi nya na iintindihan! (Be thankful because he can’t understand!)” Maddie replied which made Belle laugh

“Gusto mo, itranslate ko? (Do you want me to translate it?)” Belle teasingly asked

“YAH!!! Speak English~ I can’t understand you two!” Kyuhyun frustratedly exclaimed

“Ahahaha Maddie said--- YAH!!!” Belle exclaimed as soon as Maddie ran towards Sungmin

“Ano?! (What?!)” Maddie asked with a smirk

“I was joking a while ago~” Belle said with a come-on-it-was-just-a-joke look

“I know~ I was just approaching, oppa!” Maddie said, still with a smirk

“Bring us to MOA and Intramuros!!!” Henry suddenly popped

“WHY THERE?!” Kyuhyun and Donghae asked in unison

“Look, hyungs~ We haven’t been there!” Henry reasoned

“But we’ve been there already~” Donghae whined

“YAH!!! Stop it~” Leeteuk exclaimed

“Let the girls think where should we go~” Leeteuk said as he looks at the two girls

“I think… we should go to my province first!” Maddie exclaimed

“Oh~ It’s been a long time since I went there! LET’S GO!!!” Belle exclaimed while hugging Maddie’s arm

‘Cute~ Just like me! I think we suit each other~ keke’ Sungmin thought

“Where is your province?” Kyuhyun asked, curious

“It’s in Ilocos~” Maddie simply answered with a smile

“Well then~ First Destination: Ilocos! When are we going?” Donghae asked, excited

“Hmmm… perhaps, the next day after tomorrow!” Maddie answered

“Alright!!! So, it’s really final?” Leeteuk asked

“Final? What’s final?” Maddie asked back

“That you’ll tour us~” Leeteuk answered

“YEAH!!!” Maddie and Belle exclaimed

‘Yeah!!! It’s final~ For the others, you’ll just tour them! But for me… probably a Tour to your Heart~” Kyuhyun thought with a smile

“Come on!!! Let’s all get going~ It’s already getting late! We still need to take these young ladies home~” Leeteuk announced and all of them stood and started to walk

 

 

 

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Annyeong, chingus!!! Sorry for not updating~ MIANHAE!!! :D

Anyways, here's an update~ I hope it's not too boring and lame! 

Please don't forget to leave a comment~ COMMENTS, SUGGESTIONS AND DISCRIMINATIONS ARE FULLY AND WHOLEHEARTEDLY ACCEPTED!!! :D

P.S. I think Chapter 6 was not good at all~ 'Coz I didn't get much response from you guys~ I hope you'd comment more in this chapter!!! Thanks!!! I LOVE YOU ALL, MY DEAR SUBSCRIBERS~! :D keke

 

COMMENT REPLIES:

forevereunhaekyumin: ehh sarap mangarap sa fanfic na toh ahh haha

sujuaddict: hahaha oks lang mangarap dito!!! At isa pa, libre naman mangarap eh~ kekeke

mari_038So, while reading this, I asked myself, 'ano nga ulit ung salabat?' [that was before I read the explanation]

but I didn't notice that I asked that aloud, and then my sister said 'Pinakuluang luya. Inumin mo, gaganda boses mo.'

my reply? 'ha? Diba lambanog yun?'

okay, that was weird -.-''

anyways, parang si Siwon lang may natitirang kahihiyan sa kanila ah. XD joke lang!

sujuaddict: hahahahaha dami kong tawa sa comment mo~ LOL Di ba yung lambanog, yun yung  alak na gawa sa buko??? LOL hahahaha oo nga eh~ Sya na lang ata ang may natitirang kahihiyan eh!!! Puro lumilipad mga utak nito eh~ LOL

Siwon: Yes, I think I'm the only one~ BTW, thanks~ :D

terehenwon999 I Live in Marikina City....... It's quite far from yours....*pouts* but anyway I Love the Update and the pairings!!!!

I'm so happy that you updated!!
Ako hindi makapag update eh, kasi walang inspiration.....xD lalong hindi na ako makakapag update kapag pasukan na...xD
June 4 pasukan namin eh...... 1st yr. Na ako sa pasukan YEY!! But I'm still nervous......
Update soon! I love reading the filipino lines!xD

sujuaddict: hahaha yes~ quite far!  hahaha Thank You~ :D I'm also happy that I updated and you commented~ LOL hahaha oks lang yan~ Magkakaroon ka rin ng inspiration~ Oo nga eh! Ako sa Thursday na pasukan ko~ Haaayy... buhay nga naman noh~ hahaha sure!!! :D

kimmidoremiWOOAAAAA SungBeChul? Oh lololol and Kyuhyun..he love Maddie aww xP~~ ahaha I hope Maddie eh could she be contracted by SM or any Korean management? >_< she should play pick one, Kyuhyun or Donghae xD

sujuaddict: hahaha YEAH!!!! :D awww.... IKR!!! hmm.... I'll think about that~ kekeke But, thanks for the suggestion~ :D hahaha We'll get there~ LOL :D

kimmidoremi wah anyway I wanna ask! 'anak' in Philliphines means daughter? In Indonesian it means daughter and/or son who still child-under teens' age xD

sujuaddict: No~ lol We have the same meaning~ kekeke I just used daughter since she's talking to Maddie~ LOL  Btw, thanks for the additional info~ lol :D

sparkling2603 i copied the latest chapter again :) gotta reAD IT LATER AUTHOR! :)

sujuaddict: hahaha Thank You for always commenting~ I really appreciate it!!! Thanks again~ :D

melissa13 I VERY VERY VERY LIKE YOUR STORY.

Very Proud To Be Filipino;)
Update Soon:D
"Its More Fun In The Philippines"

sujuaddict: hahaha Thank you for liking it~ keke Me too, PROUD TO BE FILIPINO!!! :D Sure~ Yeah!!! IT'S MORE FUN IN THE PHILIPPINES~ :D

 

P.S. I don't own the pictures so, credits to the rightful owners~ :D Thanks!

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GirlDreams
#1
Update naman ^^
Saumya #2
Chapter 16: Loving the story so far! Please update soon! Much love!! ^_^ <3
Super1308
#3
Chapter 16: Unni ginawa mo ba on purpose na si maddie ay makakagrupo i yesung ???
SkiKyu
#4
Chapter 16: Whoaa!! Where's Maddie?! >< Update soon!! ^.^
octa82_ichigo #5
Chapter 16: wahhhh the story is awsome :D update soon pleaseee ^^
JewelHyuk_FishyHae #6
Chapter 16: OMO!!! Who is he, Maddie??!! Is it Kyuhyun??... TELL ME!! NOW!!!... xD xD please... nvm.. maybe Leeteuk Oppa will tell me.. Oppa, who is it??.. kekeke :)) :))

What?!!! Where did you go Maddie!!.. Uhh.. please be okay... please be safe... and SUPER JUNIOR OPPA SAVE HER!! HURRY!! :((( *worried*

update soon.. Soon.. :)
sujusyndrome #7
Chapter 16: grabe gusto ko na talaga makapunta ng Vigan :((((

Update pa ng isang chapter!! alam mo yung bitin?
Tiarakeeper #8
Chapter 15: Hi new reader here:) love ur story and hope that u would update soon:)
melovesbias
#9
Chapter 15: LEETEUK.
KYUHYUN.
DONGHAE.
YESUNG.
AMBENTA XDDDD
Updateeeeeeeee :3
HaeSun #10
Chapter 15: Awwww!!! I think Teukie Oppa likes her? Not just as a Dongsaeng!!! Hahahah!

Update Author-ssi!! Salamat? Is that right?? Hehe.