Chapter 8: Oh so many typos in my comments, sorry haha

Chapter 8: Though about some grammar now: What really confused me was reading something like: Il prit la main de Mimi et l’embrassa. I have never heard of using a verb like this (l'embrassa) with the a as an ending. Is this because it's like talking about like the it in he, she it like.... uh I at explaining. You know what I mean right? Well anyway, it was quite confusing as I never heard of it and it didn't sound French well bc I wasn't used to it. But yeah I figured it might be because you talk about us in no one's pov. And we have never done that in French class – at least not that I know.
Anyway! Thank you so so so so so much for helping me out and writing a One Shot! I TRULY LOVED IT ASDFGHJ>KL as you may have noticed on my intense spamming. Okay now I need to write a chap for my story so excuse me wile I fangirl some more before I get to work!
Thank you dearest! <3 Love~

Chapter 8: AND THEN RIGHT THERE YOU KILL ME AGAIN LIKE WHY DID YOU HAVE TO LET HIM SAY I LOOK BEAUTIFUL WHEN I BLUSH LIKE WHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY THIS IS SOO OH MY GOD I'M DEAD LIKE REALLY. (Because I've read he really likes girls who blush and I used this in one of my stories too and really I can so imagine him being like this and I so do love if he is and asdfghjkl wait whut) IT WAS TAKING MY LAST BREATH. Officially dead.

And now I tell him I love him. I LOVE YOU LEE TAEMIN YOU HEAR ME I LOVE YOU.
I'm the best he can have he said. HE LOVES ME TOO HE SAID.
Okay done. Dead. Thank you, you killed me.

Chapter 8: SA COPINE À LUI TOUT SEUL THIS IS LIKE THE CUTEST THING AAAW. AND I'M WEARING HIS FAVORITE PJ'S OF MINE WHICH IS LIKE SO TRUE BC I LOVE WEARING SHORT SHORTS AND A LARGE SHIRT WHICH IS LIKE SO Y I DON'T EVEN KNOW HAHAHAH YOU SO GOT ME. And I like that he likes it giving you a mishivious grin like I can really imagine his face right now looking at me like that HAHAHAHA. I'M SPAZZING TOO MUCH HERE SORRY. BUT I'LL CONTINUE AS I KNOW YOU LIKE IT SO AYSIDCOFGJ JO J YES. Cursing too much I hope you don't mind.

Now let's get this streight right here. I love you. Like, oh my god ASRTH why are you doing this to me. You killed me multiple times over. With what? DRIPPING WET NEKKID TAEMIN WITH ONLY A TOWEL THAT IS AND I'M WALKING IN LIKE DAYUMN TSODFÜGROKSF THANK YOU I ENJOYED THAT. I CAN SO IMAGINE HIS LOOK ON HIS FACE, HIS AMUSED GRIN AS HE'S SEEING ME BLUSHING HAHAHA I SO LOVE IT.

Chapter 8: Uh wow okay I kind of fainted. Only reading cutesy fluff killed me right there PLUS IT'S A TAEMIN OS SO I KIND OF WANT TO SHOOT MYSELF BECAUSE ASDFGHJKL WOW THANK YOU.
Okay so I really had to google a lot, first because there's new vocabulary, second because there's vocabulary that looked new to me but I kind of learned them before, and third because I wasn't always sure if what I remembered on my own was really right and I wanted to understand what's going on so I had to spent a lot time on Google. Plus, Google translator is not always that good. BUT I UNDERSTOOD AND I REALLY TRIED TO DO IT ON MY OWN AND IT WAS HARD BUT I WAS SUCCESFULL AT SOME POINTS! AND I'M GOING TO READ IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN, THUS I WILL LEARN NEW FRENCH VOCABULARY AND ALSO BETTER MY GRAMMAR OF COURSE AND GET MORE BACK INTO IT. I'm still so thankful that you're helping me out that much. AND, NOW TO THE ACTUAL POINT, THE ONE SHOT WAS SOOOOO CUTE AND ASDFGHJKL I'M SCREAMING. WE LIVE TOGETHER. AND WE HAVE A CAT. (I'm not going to translate it again to comment so I guess I have to stick with what I know on French and what I remember and as I know chat means cat so) I LOVE CATS SO MUCH AND WE HAVE A CAT YEAH.

Oh my god! I CAN'T CONTAIN MY FEELS! ASDFGHJKL. I'M GOING TO GIVE YOU A LONG COMMENT LATER I JUST WANT TO TELL YOU RIGHT NOW HOW AMAZING THAT WAS! THANK YOU! <3 (until later~ )

Chapter 7: The "beginning" of the second part is great too! Just the same reason as for the first part actually!
On the Festivity Day, I was sad Minho didn't came. ;a; BUT SUDDENLY HE WAS THERE YAY AND MR CHARMING RIGHT THERE TALKING LIKE THIS IS SUPER WEIRD BECAUSE I CAN'T IMAGINE HIM TALKING LIKE THIS AT ALL BUT I LIKE PEOPLE TALKING LIKE THIS SO IT WAS SUPER SWEET.

And Taemin, sweet baby Taemin, HE'S NOT A CHILD HE'S A MANLY MAN AND HE'S Y AND MORE Y ASDFGHJKL

And now to the ending, it really seems rushed but it's fine.

So this took me a long time again (as in getting myself to reread and give you a nice long comment) but here I am. ;a; I hope you like my criticism-ish-comment. (:

Chapter 7: YOU REALLY CONFUSED ME WITH JONGHYUN YOU KNOW. But first, I like the beginning very much (especially because it's really similiar like this in my class. Just that I don't get out with a smile but a poker face, haha but who am I telling, nevermind this) So I really liked it. You described it really good, not too much, nothing missing.
Since it's a long OS, I'm trying keep myself from commenting every sentence. So I'll wrap it up. I IN LOVED HER CONVO'S WITH JONGHYUN ASDFGHJKL SO SASSY. I love him like this, like the way you portrayed him, and again ASDFGHJKL like YOU ROCK YOU KNOW. (You, not Jonghyun). Yo totally fooled me. I was like, wait, uh, isn't this a Minho OS? Yeah well, nevermind, let's see. You fooled me big times.

AND THEN SHE MET MINHO ASDFGHJKL HOW WHUT WHY SO CUTE. AND THEN BY THAT TREE AND JONGHYUN AND ALL MY FEELS LOL THIS WASN'T EVEN MY OS BUT I SO CANNOT ANYMORE I THOUGHT THEY WOULD KIIIIIIIIIIIIIISS. AND I WANTED THEM TO KISS JUST BECAUSE HELL IT'S JONGHYUN BUT MINHO! MIINHOOO

Gladly she's not like me. I would have hoped for him to kiss me, just to know how it is, but okay if I'd hate him like that, I guess things would change. But seriously I like how deeply she hates him because usually I've never seen someone writing it THIS way. I mean, there are often stories where she hates the bad boy type, but either not good or not realistic enough (for my like). What I mean is, she reeeeeally hates him. It's super realistic. Gosh I don't know how to say it. She bursts out and this is what I never saw. I feel like the writers don't want to "hurt" the other even though it's supposed to. But yeah.
And Minho came again whoo~ I kind of new this would happen. Earlier I thought about how thex would probably meet again and this was one way I figured OOOOR in the library.

Chapter 7: I'm reading this while I'm on my phone since I'm still in bed so once I get back on my laptop, I will give you a nice, long comment! THERE IS JUST SO MUCH TO TALK ABOUT.

Chapter 5: I was a little bit confused as to why she is sitting in only her undergagements but hey whatever suits you. ;D I would really appreciate if I would dare to do this. Especially if I know my man is coming home and he's all like his. NOT AFFECTED AT ALL AS IT SEEMS.
I really enjoyed this one. I do love all of your writings, but this one, I dunno, I really loved the plot if it. It was super short ( T^T ) but it was reeeeally good. I guess I like the "what are they even talking about, what is this what he/she isn't going to tell" part in storylines the most anyway, so I guess let this be the reason.
The sudden change of subjet was nice too! Just now they were talking about bullets, wounds and whatsoever and just in the other second she's asking for something and it brings up my curiousity (if that's even a word) and I want to know what's going on! This is what brings a story to the interesting parts that makes someone continue reading. And you did great with this!
When the last sentence came I was surprised it was about his name! ;D Yet again this is soooo short. ;a;
And I've never watched any Bond films so this isn't really familiar with me. And I don't recognize the song either! But I really like this OS. But, as you said, it's supposed to be short and it will help you to get back in writing! GET BECK NOW BECAUSE I MISS IT AND WANT TO READ MORE OKAY GET ON YOUR CHAIR AND SIT BEHIND YOUR SCREEN TO WRITE SO I'M HAPPY! Thank you. (: