hung can u love me just for a day

iam 15 and my husband is 30

onew:hung! i want to talk to you

changmin:onew you are weak! you shouldn't talk

onew:hung ! please think it as my final talk

changmin:why are you saying like this onew

your not going anywhere! you are going to be with me!

we are going to raise our son together

onew:stop telling me lies hung!

your face is telling me that you are lying hung

changmin:onew i cannot lose you!

your the only one i have

onew:hung i want you

i dont want to loose you

changmin:iam yours onew! just yours

onew:hung our son is crying

changmin:he is crying because his umma doesn't listen to his appa

onew:hung he looks a lot like you

changmin:he is my child after all!

see he is so handsome

onew:hung his fingers are so short!

changmin:yeah! just like you

onew:hung he is lot leaving my finger

changmin:its because he wants you to stay with him forever onew

onew:i really want to see him grow up nicely hung!

but you know that i can never see him

changmin:onew please dont cry!

onew:hung! can you promise me to look after him 

after iam gone

changmin:i promise to look after him onew!

but your not going anywhere!

stop crying onew!

i love you

onew:hung can we go somewhere?

changmin:where do you want to go onew?

onew:just come with me hung!

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changmin:onew why did you bring me here?

i dont want to stay here 

lets go

onew:this was the place where we had our first hung

our son was conceived in this place

changmin:but you were in pain onew!

i you

i was a ! i destroyed your life

onew:no! hung you didnt destroy my life!

you  gave me happiness and it was our son

changmin:onew??

onew:hung i want a favor from you

changmin:i can give my life for you onew! just ask

onew:hung can you make love to me?

changmin:onew! your weak! we should not do this

onew:please hung! before i go i want you !

i want to love you ! for the last time

i want to feel you hung

changmin:onew! please dont do this!

i dont want to cause you more pain

onew:please hung! i love you

onew pov

i didnt wait any longer!

and started to kiss changmin hung!

and he responded back

i was in such a hurry to have with him

i wanted this! i wanted to be with him!

he quickly removed our clothes and continued to kiss me

at last i was being loved

iam not forced to have like the first time

i wanted my changmin hung to make love to me 

so that i can remember him always

changmin:onew! please stop me if your in pain

onew:hung! i want this please enter me

changmin: i love you onew

onew:i love you too hung

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changmin pov

yesterday  i and onew had

no it was not it was love

i made love to him!

yes i love this onew

who is the most clumsiest person!

i love him!

 i cannot leave him!

i have to save him!

changmin:onew get up! we have to go

today your going to undergo an important treatment

come on onew! 

get up!

see i brought this ring for you

jung onew will you marry me?

changmin pov

why is there no response?

onew get up!

i started checking his pulse

his pulse is not there!

he is cold!

he is not responding!!

onew get up! dont leave me like this onew

changmin:please onew!

wake up!

onew!!!

 

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author pov

​thank you for your support 

​arigato :)

 

 

 

 

 

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JaeBeloved
#1
Chapter 42: I'm sad that Onew didn't get a chance to see his child grow up, at least the boy will be surrounded by a loving family. Thank you for sharing!
Yunjaeismorethanreal
#2
Chapter 1: He is always sleeping??
blackqueenkai
#3
Chapter 22: Aw so changmin is a bad guy
blackqueenkai
#4
Chapter 7: Aw...thats so sad......Wtf yunho
blackqueenkai
#5
Chapter 3: Damn jae ??? 0.0
SalmaRose
#6
Chapter 42: I read it all in 2 hours and ended up crying like a river although Jaejoong dumbness was funny in the first chaps! Gud job authonim although it has a sad ending -sniff-*ugly tears*
ditzyyunnie
#7
Chapter 42: *it was touching~~~
yuki_chicken
#8
Chapter 42: awwww~~~~~~~~
*sobs in a very ugly way*
UknowMi
#9
Chapter 42: so onew died in the end but at least min got his son with him and yunjae's together, thankies for this story and all the best ^-^
mysterycodes #10
Chapter 42: Such a sad ending.
Thanks for writing such a great story author-nim. :)