Remains

Description

This piece attempts to describe what regret feels like, in 788 words.

Myungsoo-centric.

One-shot AU, Introspective.

Foreword

Myungsoo wonders if this was really what he wanted.

 

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Reviewed at:

✏ Marie's Request Shop [The Review || 57/65 → 87.6%]

 

I have picked up my old love for English. You can expect to see more in the future.

Please leave your thoughts and comments. I only want to improve. Thank you!

 

image credit to gorgeousqueen @ deviantart.

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Sumayeol #1
Chapter 1: We need sequel
keygakeun #2
That was soo lovely sad :'C I love it so emotional and the wording you used.. just fabulous c: <3
DMace9
#3
I love it...the way you convey Myungsoo's feelings and everything.
Regret is a terrible feeling >.<
But it seems that Myungsoo will be able to redeem himself.
eseech
#4
I like this. :)

I say that a lot, but I really do mean it. I like your writing style and the way you structure your writing. It really flows well and gives a longing, regretful kind of feel. I like the emotions you were portraying and the way you did it. This is probably one of the best one-shots I've read it awhile.

You're a very good author. Keep writing! :)