On the Edge

Description

 

Soaked, dishevelled copper brown hair swayed as rough wind caressed his whole being ruthlessly. Cold rain showered his uncaring body. Both his feet were at the edge of the rooftop. Just another step, he would fly downwards and hit the hard pavement below. A lone tear joined the rainwater before finding its way to the man's chin. His lips curved upwards in a sad, mournful smile. With arms outstretched, he closed his eyes to savour the soothing breeze and the refreshing rain…

 

One last time.

 

Whispering a silent goodbye, he jumped off the edge.

Foreword

Hello...

It's peach_fantasy again... 

Hope you will enjoy this one-shot...

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looshyhooshy #1
Chapter 3: I liked it ♡♡♡
naznew #2
Chapter 3: This story make me sad...
likaCXL
#3
Chapter 4: oooooh.... sequel... that would be good.... oh maybe make L jealous?? don't know : ))
likaCXL
#4
Chapter 3: wow.... i really like reading stuff like this.... really noce story : ))
otpenes
#5
Chapter 3: Waah, that was nice! :D
It was actually a nice ending already. :D
But, since there is a sequel! SEQUEL TIME! :D
and, oenni, you used Shu's name again in this chapter xD
otpenes
#6
Chapter 2: You said, "Shuichi" somewhere.. is that suppose to be Sungjong?
Pride. Pride can eat you. Stupid Myungsoo. Why are you like that to Sungjong? I'll blame you forever if this wasn't a dream. Sungjong couldn't have jumped. He can't.
and, the poem, I like it! :D
otpenes
#7
Chapter 1: Man, what is this!? Why is Myungsoo acting like that? That pabo! He's all, I can't forgive myself if something happens to him but.. he goes around pushing him.. great!
That's just a dream, right? A dream. A dream in a dream?!
Moving on.....
thepurplzebra
#8
Chapter 4: Ahh, this was really good. I think it's perfect just the way it is. <3. Seriously, it had just the right amount of angst, and the ending was nice :)
honey13494 #9
Chapter 4: sequel!!make it myungyeoljong then sungjong can be on the edge again >< just saying..
anyway good job author-nim..thumbs up
myungjong forever <3 <3 <3
Raelin
#10
NNDVHSUJPNDJKBBFU FOREVER SCARRED FO LIFE! THIS WAS SO SAD. /dis from sadness T T It's a good thin Jongie js okay, though. ^^ NICE JOB AUTHOR SONGSAENGNIM!