Chapter 14: ok haha i just read this and what the i dont know what to think anymore ahah i cant even trust my own mind anymore im so minded im doubting myself tbh its a really great writing and open ended stories like this just let you view things from different perspectives and seriously open up your eyes (or mind) i love all of your writings especially this confusing masterpiece right here ugh what a great job you have done

Chapter 14: Hey!! Wouah this story was really twisted but I love it!!! And the open ending let our imagination works for the end^^
I read your author notes and you said that you've just written your mind without a plot or something but your story is about illusions and reality then I guess that it is not a big problem if things are not coherent. It just make the mind of the readers work more ;)
Good job and thank you for this fiction ;)
See you!!
<3

Chapter 14: this is confusing, but nice story :)

This was a very enjoyable fic since I have a thing for psychological stories and twisted stuff (i hope that doesn't make me sound creepy) but my questions are ;who was the girl myungsoo was sobbing about? And did myungyeol kiss? And does myungsoo find sungyeol so interesting that he opted not to kill him or did he never have the intention of killing him and myungsoo just wanted to control sungyeol's emotions and mind since sungyeol was always controlled and calm even when he was bullied and how did sungyeol kidnap myungsoo in the first place? And when myungsoo said to sungyeol 'you broke me' was he referring to something that happened in the past between them that caused his sadistic and lunatic ways ? Did myungsoo seek attention from sungyeol when they were young but sungyeol ignored him so he reacted with violence and got addicted to torturing others? Was sungyeol special to myungsoo or was it just an experiment?. Is myungsoo gonna torture sungyeol more or what?. Omg this is such a long comment and annoying one at that. You are probably soooooo irritated by this obnormally long comment which has tons of silly questions but I m really curious T.T sorry.....
You know I really hate open endings they frustrate me to no end so I would be very grateful if you were to proceed with a sequel which has more of myungyeol in it. Lol I sound so demanding anyhow this fic was amusing and intriguing and I m sorry for annoying you with questions.

Chapter 14: I like this. I think it was amazing. A little confusing but I think that's what I like about it. It's complexity.

Chapter 14: …shouldn't he suffer? Myungsoo's a sadist, he should've have done the same to Sungyeol. (Not that I want that, because NO, okay, N.O.)

This is so confusing (and, btw, this is the third comment. Just pointing it out).

What I wanted to ask too (before I kind of forgot where I was) is Jang Dongwoo, the one Sungyeol imagined. Why? I mean, he didn't know of him dying at birth, did he? And how the hell did Sungyeol get schizophrenia? There is nothing in this telling me how he got that. Because, Sungyeol said he draw a dino guy back then in school (elementary school? Or was it pre-school?). So, he was aware of his existence (in his mind) since little (if I may say so).

Gosh. So complicated. And tbrh, this is the first time I got to write so much in that comments thingy. I'm sorry. (I really am.)

So, because I've a.headache now (and I'm tired as hell, it's 4 in the morning here) I'm going.

Lastly, this . But good . And even though things doesn't make sense, they kind of do too. And really, I love this (whatever you want to call it).

I.LOVE.THIS.

❤_❤

Hwaiting author-nim! All the best to you! :))

Chapter 14: …telling him to go to some more private place. Now I really want to know if fate was cruel to him too. After all he just wanted to solve this Milk abductor case. I really liked him. I could have been him because, gosh, I was thinking some things similar to his and when Sunggyu was going home and then went back to Sungyeol, I just thought when he left first he should've stayed with Sungyeol because - what if something happened to the boy that was a genius?

But seriously, this whole open ending is killing me. I don't know what to want to believe. I'd rather believe everything was real because THIS AN MORE INTERESTING STORY. But it's better if it's just Sungyeol imagine things because it doesn't cause that much if pain. Though, on the other hand, it also does. Why? Because he'd have some real deep and ty mental problems and I'm not someone to want my ultimate bias to suffer. I'm not that sick, okay?

So, in the end, I want better to not interpret to much in it. (Though, the "I'm a fan if games" thing at the end just reminded immediately at Myungsoo because Sungyeol mentioned about him liking playing games.

I'd rather let you tell me what really happening than trying to find an ending for myself because 50 endings are just - ugh - . I'm sorrynotsorry.

Btw, why couldn't Tablo and Sungjong try to escape this or at least kill them? Or how did Hoya know about that house? Did he knew about him doing experiments with Myungsoo (and the other way around)? Because, honestly, I don't get Hoya at all. He's more mysterious to me now. More than Myungsoo because that's a kind if solved case in this fic. And, did Myungsoo and Sungyeol kiss? Because you briefly wrote their mouth touched and then everything went black for Sungyeol and the next time he knew nothing. I don't know why this bothers me. But this makes me wonder - why wasn't Sungyeol one of the victims? I mean, Sungyeol was bullied by him (that's why they all said and so did Myungsoo and Sungyeol). Why - tbc…

Chapter 14: Okay, first off (except the fact I just found this today (or more like yesterday)) I want to say that you make me wonder about too many things at the same time. And, btw, this story is good. Haha, lol, random.

But really, I expected some other things to happen. When I started to read this (a few hours ago) I was like, "MyungYeol is creepy here and everything is so confusing." but then everything became a bigger mess than it already was and questions above questions popped up in my mind. Though, nonetheless, I ignored my siblings constant calls just to read this in one go because it's interesting and all those plot twist are like HOLY .

I never was a fan of genre like this and really, reading things that don't make sense but makes sense at the same time are too complicated for me to understand. I'm stupid, okay? So this is new territory for me and, hell, I love it.

I know another story (wow, why am I writing about another fic now?) that is kind of this (except the death thingy because in there just one girl is going to die).

I really like to think about fics a lot and I go on talking about them like their happening in real life (when I told my siblings what I was reading and why I was laughing at Hoya's text messages they thought it was real ).

I don't know how long this can get but this is not the end. No, it's not, I'm sorry. (Maybe I'll need to post two comments.) Okay, sorrynotsorry.

What I really was curious about all the time was Sungyeol imaging Myungsoo in that house when they were 'experimenting'. Because I couldn't think of a way to explain how Myungsoo could escape when the police came and took Sungyeol without even caring that the scientist wasn't alone. But now, I come to think, if Hoya ccame and got him, then Myungsoo had good chances to get away. Because after all they work together, don't they?

What I didn't get either was if Sunggyu was still alive. Because we just really only knew about Woohyun pointing a gun at his head and - tbc…