Bloody Mary : Sungmin's Meeting

Bloody Mary

Yeah, I've updated the next chapter.. :D It's kinda tiring that I translated my story just in one hour ^^' so, happy reading, guys ^^ and, I decided to change the picture since the last picture was too scary .__.

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Happy reading, enjoy! ^^

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Meanwhile, Sungmin had a few scary seconds in the dark bathroom. A pang of fear started to creep in his heart, making his nerve a little shriveled. In one hand, he really wanted to scream as he saw his own reflection on the mirror. The minimal lightning gave the impression of sinister—even at his own reflection. But in the other hand, Sungmin knew. He wasn’t able to return. Something held him there, and that’s what Sungmin did. Last up until one minute, and then he can return himself into Kyuhyun’s comfortable embrace.

Yeah, he just need to survive for one minute.

Sungmin his lower lip before he called the name. The name that even scared him since the beginning.

“Bloody Mary…”

Even just mention her name once had made Sungmin’s tounge felt like tied.

“Bloody Mary…”

The second call was more bizarre. Sungmin vaguely felt the wind was blowing around his shoulder.

Last call. Sungmin established himself and his faith.

“Bloody Mary…”

Sungmin called for the last time, and then Sungmin felt a little relieved. ‘Now, just wait until one minute..’ inner Sungmin was happy as he sat down on the edge of the bathub, making face to face with the mirror. Yeah, Sungmin did feel relieve. But this relief is… awkward. Something made it strange, but Sungmin didn’t know what it is.

Sungmin slowly narrowed his eyes, surprised to see his own reflection in the mirror. No, not because there was something wrong about him, no. But, because of something near his shoulder.

Something that… white. Kinda looked like a typical outfit of old England. Sungmin frowned. He’s in Korea, right? And, he was alone here, right? 

Right?

Vaguely, that ‘something’ increasingly clear. And Sungmin felt like petrified when he saw the original figure of that ‘something.’

A woman with messy-black hair, with her hollow eyes filled with blood. Her rotting skin was pale and bluish, and , opened wide, showing her inside of that were just dark blood. And she was standing there, right next to Sungmin’s reflection.

Still satisfy his mind with fear, Sungmin glanced to his left side, where the woman was supposed to be. However, there was just empty air that colored as black as the darkness. Sungmin’s candle in his hand gently vibrated as Sungmin’s hand trembled.

TEK!

The woman’s neck sounds so scary when she turned over her neck, towards Sungmin’s reflection, instantly made Sungmin’s courage went down so fast. The woman raised her left hand, tried to reach Sungmin’s reflection’s cheek with her rotten hand.

Sungmin trembled as he felt the cold air hit his left cheek, where the woman raised her left hand and almost put it on Sungmin’s reflection left cheek.

Still satisfy his mind with fear, Sungmin glanced once again to the left. And suddenly, the torn corner of the ghost’s lips went up, forming an eerie grin. And Sungmin, unable to bear his fear no longer, jumped toward the door, screaming.

“GYAAAAAAA!!!”

 

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“S-So, Bloody Mary was a woman who murdered in front of the mirror by her own husband?” Eunhyuk asked with his expression was full of fear. His whole body shaked of fear.

Henry nodded, “Ne, that’s all the story..” he said softly. Honestly, he started to scared too after telling the story.

“And… what usually she done to the people who used to call her?” Shindong asked in choked voice. Fear of the figure of Bloody Mary suddenly greater after he heard the story. Moreover, that boy—Henry—told the story in the middle of dark midnight, with no lights except the candles that started to shortened.

“When she got to touch you…” Henry grew pale, “She will take your eyes.. Or worse…” Henry started to sobbed, “She’ll kill you..”

Everyone were choked hearing that. They suddenly looked at the bathroom anxiously, wondering how’s Sungmin doing there.

“GYAAAAAAH!!!” Sungmin’s extremely loud scream was heard. And the ‘man’ got to the bathroom door as fast as possible. They ran towards the bathroom door, and Kyuhyun immediately broke the bathroom door that was previously locked. They directly got Sungmin’s body who was fainted of fear. Sungmin’s candle which fell on the floor has taken by Siwon. Then, they lied that cute man on the sofa. While ‘ukes’—minus Leeteuk who was calling someone on the phone—directly approached Sungmin who was lying unconsciously.

“Hueeeee ~~~ Minimi ~~~” Ryeowook cried hard when he saw Sungmin’s face was as pale as a corpse. Luckily, Sungmin’s chest was moving up and down, indicating that Sungmin was still alive.

“Turn on the fuse!!” Kyuhyun ordered as he saw his pale lover, trying to disenchant Sungmin. Leeteuk patted on Kyuhyun’s shoulder. “Don’t worry, Kyu.. I’ve called the housekeeper just now and asked him to turn the fuse on..” Leeteuk said, then he got focused on the fainted Sungmin.

“Henry..” Siwon called the crying Henry that cried because he had made Sungmin fainted, “What about the end of this game?” Siwon asked with a dezed gaze.

Henry sobbed quietly, “It depends, hyung..” he replied, then went back sobbing. “If you’re lucky—sob—then Bloody Mary will disappear by herself.. But… but.. if you’re not…” Henry’s cry was getting harder, “She… she will ask for one life to drive her back into the glass.. Hueeeee ~~~~” Henry cried hard in Zhoumi’s arm.

Siwon choked. That guy really expect God will give them the first option between the two options that Henry said.

TIK!

The lights suddenly on, made them instantly groaned in relief. Siwon blowed up the candles on the table, then looked towards to the bathroom. But what he saw made his voice suspended in his throat.

The figure of a woman with messy hair, hollowed eyes, and gaping mouth was standing in front of the bathroom door. Siwon—with his broken movement—poked his dongsaengs and hyungs.

Henry was the first one who followed Siwon’s direction to the bathroom. “Bloody Mary..” he whispered with horror, made all the members—minus Sungmin—eyed to the bathroom in the feeling between shocked and horrified to see the woman who lived in the middle of 1880 age. They knew, they got the second option, and that wasn’t good.

“AAAAAAAAAAARGHHHH!!!!”

And they could only scream when Bloody Mary was hovering and showed her frightening grin towards them.

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Gah! It’s finish! ^^ what do you think, guys? Is it not scary? Or, is it too weird? :/ need your comment’s guys! ^^ do you think I should stop writing? Any critics? :D any mistakes in my English? :D thank you for the comments before ^^ I appreciate that ^^

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Kimgaram123 #1
Chapter 2: I hope this account still active, but this story must be update
Angel-princess #2
Chapter 2: What happened? Who died? Why do I have all these questions now?❤️
_mary101 #3
Chapter 2: That was scaryyyy ToT
I opened this story, saw the picture and screamed... i think i couldn't face mirror for a while :/
elf #4
Chapter 1: Before I read this story, I just have to let out that I am scared right now and it almost gave me a heart attack when I saw that picture and its 10 pm so yeah I really got a heart attack at the picture ._.
SimplyAsian #5
Chapter 2: That was scary. I like how the ending is open to the readers interpretation.

Your story is well written but the only thing I want to say is to be careful of word choices because sometimes it doesn't seem clear on what it's supposed to mean. For example you wrote:
"His whole body shaked of fear"
Instead of saying that, you can say "his whole body shook from fear"

Other than that, your story was clear and enjoyable. Great job:)
Sun_J1001 #6
daebakkkkk.....so scary....
sweetjellyvelly
#7
I just woke up and then looked to the mirror. I saw a woman with messy hair and bloody eye. It was me xD lol.. I used eye-liner and i when i washed my face, the black thing roll down my cheek.
Grey_Storm
#8
aww!! i wanna read more!! pls??
sequel?? *kitten eyes*
donttouchmychicken
#9
umm....... that was freaking freaky!!