This Night

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“You can live your whole life

Not realizing that what you’re looking for

Is right in front of you.”

- One Day; David Nicholls

 

Uhhh... this is my first ever attempt to write a fic. a one-shot fic.

I don't have superb writing skills but yeah, I tried... really hard. I hope you guys like it.

This is just a typical story... about friendship and love. You know, where one friend likes the other secretly or something like that.

but this one I would say is a bit.... heart-rending? I guess. I dunno.

 

Dang. I'm bad at introductions too so I guess I'll stop babbling *zips my mouth* 

Anyways, I hope you'll like it! ^^

PS: I give my credits to the person who owns the picture. Sorry~ I  borrowed it ^^"

Foreword

“ I want you to know that someone is waiting for you to love him back…” and he smiled. It was the most heart-breaking smile I’ve ever seen.

 

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Jinki loves someone who he doesn't love him back.

Key is his only bestfriend, a friend that truly cares.

his bestfriend loves him and he didn't even noticed, not until that night. 

 

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Jinkeyk #1
Chapter 1: Fudge. It got me!! I need more though we already know what’s gonna happen. <3
Hanna19 #2
Chapter 1: this need a sequel♥
aucklandnz91 #3
Why they can't say love to each other??? (╥﹏╥)
Thanks 4 your story :)
inftocean #4
awww~~ this is sweet, yet somehow sad.. I really enjoy reading it! ^^d
chansai_unmyong #5
i was about to sleep but then i decided to read this... love the story! <3
noriko24 #6
I cant believe it! This is your first fic for oneshoot? Omg, I really love it. I thought the story had sad ending since Jinki asked Kibum is he liked Jonghyun or not, but Kibum answered he liked him. Noooo, but after that he texted Jinki and then..... that's my favorite part ;)
thank you for sharing~ keep writing, kay!
raelee #7
First fic? Nice (: You broke my heart when Kibum said he liked Jonghyun, but i ended up smiling like an idiot with the last line. I hope to see more from your dear, please continue to write! (:
emptycavern #8
Not a bad attempt at all for your first fic!
I really liked this :) Kibum bailing out on his date just to make sure than Jinki is okay. God, I found that part so heart-warming, when he just appeared and shouted Jinki's name.

The ending was perfect too :)
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