Given Time

Description

At the end of an hour, at the end of a bullet, there's always something unfinished. Something broken, something lost.

Given time, maybe...

Heh, there's always that maybe.

Foreword

 

Written for this prompt:

Till' I Find You - Yiruma 

Written for:

The Thirteenth Hour [Writing Contest]

This contest is organized by the lovely

Cereal 

So if you love me (or her) (or both), please join~

Rules (although you'll see them again if you join):

 

Rules

- Keep it fresh, make it new (do not enter a pre-existing fic that has been published to AFF)

- Be as suggestive and y as you want, but penetration is not allowed (no )

- It's implied (subscribe)

- Only use one pairing per entry (do not write 2min with a side of TaeNy, etc)

- Mention this contest and your prompt(s) in the foreward of your entry (cannot be simplified)  

- An entry of any length is acceptable and there is no limit as to how many entries you may submit (this isn't really a rule, but you should still know)

Please testify that I followed all the rules...

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MrsLeeTaemin
#1
Chapter 1: Reading this after watching 13 reasons why was a terrible idea.
devilishangel_15
#2
Chapter 1: Wow! You are INCREDIBLE! *sighs* I don't know hhow you do it. I LOVE IT!
luhannie-exo
#3
NO
NO
NO NO
IM SOBBING SO HARD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT HONESTLY MAKES ME JEALOUS OF THE LOVE THEY NEVER HAD BECAUSE IT WAS A LOVE SO STRONG THEY TRUELY DOD LOVE EACH OTHER
Minhoppa
#4
Chapter 1: I can't even say anything except for I loved it...left speechless.
NyappyShipper #5
Chapter 1: Pitiful sobbing... What is air?!?!
Toyobi
#6
Chapter 1: There are only so many words I can say about a story like this. And none can seem to come to mind. I felt my heart rip out and stepped on. But I hope they found each other peacefully and spend eternity together.
Telissa #7
OMG
THIS
IS
SO
FREAKIN
BEAUTIFUL .
kokojjang
#8
this is so touching.
But minho is an idiot, i guess.
Cereal
#9
Your words moved me to tears. There are only twenty-six letters in our alphabet, you realize, and only so many combinations of those letters can pull tears from me. I hope you're happy now.
Anyways, your prompt really did fit this well. The song is so painfully complimentary to your words, to this story of love that never should have been and never got to be...
You know I'm not one for angst, but this was done so beautifully that I can't help but appreciate it. I didn't really see the midnight theme incorporated, but other than that, this was delightful. You know, in a really saddening way...
8/10