So sweet~ This is very good,fluffy(gosh i love fluff*.*) interesting and good written too.. I love this! Great job, keep writting stories/oneshots/more jongki or anything! ^^ Thank you for writting such a brilliant fanfic. I want moooorrrreee~ ;P
This was good. All the characters were very cute with their antics, and imagining them doing the stuffs they did in the story was very easy because of the way you described them.
The way you wrote also helped a lot. As a reader, I was glad I wasn't burdened by piecing the ideas together because you were careful with your grammar and consistent with your perspective. [POV]
In a nutshell, I enjoyed reading this a lot :) It's rare to find good Jongki one-shots and so i do hope you can take time to write another one soon^^
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