Okay so the majority of my comments is going to be about Siwon because I just happen to notice his characterisations so much more because he's obviously someone I bias...HARD...so brace yourself, dahling:
Siwon smells like cinnamon and grapefruit...MMM.
Holy ! Teukie's dream at the bottom of chapter one...@_@ and I like how uncertain you made him. And how he was able to stomp Heechul flat. LOL.
“Siwon sitting on the couch, reading his newspaper, in a very suave manner”
LOLOLOL. SIWON MAKES NEWSPAPER READING FASHIONABLE. GOT IT. Might the candied cherries be alluding to the sticky sweetness of the situation? xDDD
Eeek! DAT CAKE WITH DAT ENDING. My eyes and brain have cavities :O
Awww so sweeeet ><
WonTeuk ah , may i come in to ur room? i want to know what u guys do . lol
Sweet of you , author :)
it feels so real >///< *delusionalshipper*
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