Venus Capriccio

Description

my first story >_<

well~ this story is based on from comic "Venus Capriccio" By: Mai Nishikata

I hope you like it ^^

Foreword

"This is our first dat and yet you eat so much... Also, can't you dress cuter than this?" The boy said

 

but the girl still busy eating her cake

 and The boy feel annoyed...

 

"I won't think of you as a woman anymore... Let's break up then" The boy said all of sudden

the girl stopped eating...   and then he stands up and said "You have the looks and body of a model, which is my type, so I went out with you. but, It looks like I was absolutely wrong about you" He left her in the cafe

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EMT0304 #1
get well soon
EMT0304 #2
Cute....
soosica1989 #3
lol.. Fany :)
angeltaeny28 #4
haha.. fany's character is somewhat like tomboyish ..
this is really different

looking forward to your next updates :D
EMT0304 #5
I agree with Vidaloca. Sometimes, as long the story nice then will be fine. Fighting!
soosica1989 #6
Subs.. kinda interesting.. update soon;)
vidaloca #7
Author~~
I love it.
Screw that grammar error thing...
As long as the readers can fit themselves into your storyline then its okay.. ^^
Believe me.
Author hwaiting~! <3
Take you time to write it & I'll wait for an update.