Story review#1: For Second Ride (Chapter 2)

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Title: Second Ride

Author: missterious

Title (3/5):

It suits the story, but it isn't all that interesting and doesn't capture my attention.

 

Forward and Description (10/10):

I'm giving you a ten for the cute poster because I don't really have a forward/description to judge. Though I do like how you are challenging yourself with your equation.

 

Grammar and Language (20/20):

I didn't see any grammatical errors, and congratulations, you used several words that I would not know out of context! This is impressive, as I usually have to explain what words I use mean to my friends. I also like your writing style, it has a nice, smooth flow to it.

 

Plot Line (25/30):

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missterious
so the mistan pairing with spin the bottle is on hold
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Fox-PigletMania #1
Chapter 9: COSER? Are their any pics of them online? I googled it and cant find anything?
Fox-PigletMania #2
Upvote because Misster.
ailoveu #3
Chapter 13: Oh is a big pleasure! <3
Thank you for letting me do this!
hopelessly_hopeful #4
Chapter 6: Oh this one was really good :D I loved all of the comparisons and how wild yet affectionate she was ^-^ <3 I'm putting this on my list of favorite girlxgirl one-shots lol *happy*
soupah #5
BTW your poster-upgrade on "Sleep-over" is nicer than the other artist's. Just sayin'.
missterious #6
@snowy <3
snappsnack #7
OMG chapter 5. the little me inside my head is running around my brain screaming KITTENNN!!!. that was facking cute on so many levels. <3
hYper-blop #8
Lol. I'm sorry, I was being very unclear.
It's like... I was captured during the story, but after I finished reading it, it doesn't leave me a vivid memory. It's nice at a moment, but not for long term.
I'm both underwhelmed and overwhelmed at the same time which I know is so weird haha
One: For the poster, err, did I write something wrong?? I meant more fade effects so that it blurs better.
Two: Oh crap. Is thaf so.... I'm sorry, I can't distinguish them so I got them messed up.
Three: About the Foreword, I wasn't so troubled so it's perfectly fine, it's just a suggestion. You have the right to choose.
Too many commas? Looool. I put lots of commas too XD
Once again, did I write it wrongly? Omg, I should edit. What I meant was that you used Trebuchet, and THAT is the font that I think isn't so suitable. And yes I agree, fonts in AFF .

:) yep, thanks for requesting, and it's refreshing to see someone that gives me feedback on my review as well and don't take it all in one swing without thinking further. I can totally tell that you're very experienced in writing. I apologise for my mistakes. Haha, you can always come back for a review, I look forward to your stories.
missterious #9
I officially protest AFF's lack of cool fonts :)
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