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Author: missterious
Review fanfic: Cat's Cradle
Summary/Description: They were caught in the web of their youth. Aaron remembered. Jin had conveniently forgotten the torment she had put Aaron through. 
Reviewer: lockeyme

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------   Title--5/5 The title is good. Unique. And it really fits the story. It's a good choice because the story may not be about it but it's the main reason for the flow of the story. You get what I mean? I really like it because it's not too wordy and it makes sense unlike those who are so "direct".    Graphics/Posters--5/5 You must be a creative person. You make stories and make your own posters. I really like your poster because everything in it is meaningful. And the intricate patterns of the thread looks cool--it adds to the mood of the story.  I love it. It's simple but it's meaningful.   Foreward/Description-10 N/A   Originality--10/10 It's pretty original. Of course, I've never read anything with this plot. It's unpredictable   Plot--20/20 Honestly, I can't think of a story with a mysterious plot. But as I read through the story, I was like "Ah, so it's like this." I really don't know what to say because it's unpredictable. For a moment, I thought Jin was a lunatic because why would "she" do that to Aaron? (I'm not familiar with the characters) Then in the end, I realized, they really treasure their "friendship". In real life (I'm the kind of person who compares stories to real life so bear with me ^^), you'd hardly see someone who would bring up the past and confront someone after 15 years. But I guess, it could really happen. I was moved, honestly.    Grammar/Spelling--27/30 Your grammar is excellent. There might have some mistakes but I hardly notice them. Though, maybe you should learn how to not be too wordy sometimes. It would help lessen the awkwardness.^^   Flow--10/10 The flow is in normal "rate". It's not that fast and it's not slow. You did a great job in focusing more of the present life while reminiscing the past.    Neatness-3/5 I don't know how to judge you here. There's no problem with the fonts and even the color because it's not annoying and it didn't cause "any pain" LOL. Frankly, I do not like your choice of making the texts "stronger" because I just don't like it. But I'm not telling you to change them just because I do not like it. Maybe because I just don't feel it? LOL. But it kind of lessened the formality of your writing. I don't know--for me, how an author presents a story also affects the interest of the readers.    Extra- 5/5 This story isn't as awkward as it would be in real life. How you wrote it is really good. Normally, I would let something distract me while reading but when I started to read yours, I was pretty "absobed".    Total: 85/90 points   ---------------------------------------------------------------- Congratulations! You managed to get high remarks from our most strict reviewer here xD  

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A/N: Wow, you gave such a great review, I'm at a loss of what to say in return! LOL.

Okay, here's a little something:

 

You said I am "too wordy sometimes". I may be - but I'm not quite sure how to fix that. Any pointers? If you would have left even one short example, that could have been very helpful to me :)

As for my font...I've noticed that on different browsers, the text appears more, or less 'bolded' than in others. Kind of strange....i'll revise the font itself, as I can't even remember what prompted me to put everything in BOLDED text!? Sorry about that, I have no decent reason for having done it lol.

I'm glad you were able to be "absorbed" without knowing the characters beforehand! Thanks so much for the favorable comments!

 

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Title (5/5)

The title explains well, it’s linked and entirely relevant to the story. Since it is short it’s very easy to remember, using a children’s game as a title gives somewhat an alluring and curious feel. Awesome!

Appearance (3/5)

Well, a bundle of string spells enough. Is the one with the glassy look Jin? (@_@ I still can’t distinguish them since I only knew about them last night when I re