One Day Story of Changmin

Description

annyeong haseyo...
i'm new here,
please for your help coz my english is bad and it's not my mother tongue,
but i'll always learn to make it up better,
so, tell me if i make mistake in grammar or vocab
 

Foreword

it's my first fanfic in English. I hope you will like it
dun forget to support me with give me comment or advise to make it up better for my next fanfic.
Gomawo!

Title      : One Day Story of Changmin
Length : One-shot
Genre  : Friendship
Cast     : Shim Changmin

Changmin felt depressed because he couldn't meet his hyungs, JaeChunSu. He went to the beach to let his burden go coz he couldn't handle all of the problem by himself.

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summer-star #1
Visiting old fics!
justaquietasian #2
Chapter 1: I READ THIS IN ONE DAY. WOAH THIS WAS REALLY GOOD. I'M GLAD I FOUND THIS ON THE RANDOM STORY BUTTON.
PurpleCrown #3
Uwaaah, cute kids... o_o
This is very nice and simple. ^^
Thank you for the story!
fdjkaljgnfdaklgnj #4
niceee
BANAHalmae #5
this was terrific! nice.
YuRee_LuvJejung #6
@hiromi:thankz a lot ^^...i will try to write fanfic again
Hiromi #7

hi... nice one-shot, i really didn't read alot of fics like this i prefer to read a chapter one .. but its really good !! i felt like you put your own feeling in it.. am i right? is it your first try to write a story? if it is.. its a good begining!! and ur english is good too don't worry.. hope to read more from you ^^

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