Heartbreaker

Description

Minho breaks Taemin. Key breaks Minho. Jonghyun can't break anyone so settles for breaking the car (and claims it's a Bling thing). 

Onew would eat chicken, but he ain't in here. Sorry kids. 

 

 

 

Genre(s): Angst. A lot of it. Blink-and-you'll-miss-it!Fluff (okay, not really xD). Implications of but it's left to your wide, wide imagination. 

Pairing(s): 2min, not-so-ninja!Jongkey

Disclaimer: They aren't mine. I just want them to be each other's. 

Foreword

Hey so... AFF freaked out and I lost 2 of my oneshots but one of them was like, the most ingenious thing I ever wrote and I worked my off for it, and I didn't wanna lose it, so I decided to retype it and maybe change some stuff based on what I can remember. I'm miserable and don't have enough time, but I want to do this, even if it's just for my own sake. So, if you've read it, then enjoy again with some minor changes. If you haven't, you should read it. Now. 

Before I really flip out. 

I mean, please? With Jjong's puppy-dog eyes and cherries and whipped cream and sparkles and fairies on top? 

 

Also, if you've read my other oneshot "It Will Rain" before it got aeoifnaewiogn'd, I'm not doing a sequel for it. I'm just not in the mood anymore, sorry >.<

Comments

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shawol81025
#1
Chapter 1: That was really sad... yeah Minho if you just tried a little bit harder and a little bit earlier... Poor Taeminnie! But despite the fact that your story is really sad... I love it!
redbubblegum #2
that was...wow amazing *claps* awww so sad :'( but I'm happy because Taemin moved on :')
OblivionOfMisery
#3
Their breakup is kind of funny. Well, I find it funny and it seems like Taemin understood Minho. So I thought that this was kind of light until the end. Not to sound arrogant here but I think you failed to drift the story into an angst before it reached the end. Maybe because of the refrigerator stuffed with Banana Milk. That scene kind of told me that this story has a happy ending. Another thing, the narration has some unnecessary comments that make the story lighter. Sorry for sounding so arrogant while I haven't written a single fanfic. XD
WhisperOfTheLucifer
#4
So angst, I love it!
gegegaby
#5
Awhhh that's realy sad. Love your description btw.
Can't wait for it~