　　　☆ the rankers.

reviews.

accepted ...

so first off, thank you so much for being the first applicant and getting your application in so quickly! i was absolutely shocked someone finished before i could even put yoorim up :sob sob: looking through your app, i really like the concept! reminds me of gambit from xmen a little bit. i think the only thing i have a little bit of an iffy time with is saebin's involvement with the guild that jackson had and the fact that there are no guild names mentioned, as it's unclear whether or not saebin was actually apart of the guild that jackson led or not, and the guilds themselves .. i kinda need names :sob: it'll be really helpful for me if you name them instead, they can be named anything but i'm just not sure what to name them since they come from you, ya know? other than that i think the app is fine and i really enjoyed the abilities / power! also, the miracle guild would definitely already know everything they could about him.. researching a ranker is top priority for guilds in general, especially high end guilds like miracle because they need to know who they're taking in and background checks are imperitive! so they'd already know his full name, maybe not that he's joining for revenge but there could be an inkling, or maybe even that's the reason they recruited him in the first place honestly. probably that, having someone join to assist them on their path and then use them for your own gain.. very much a guild thing to do loool but yeah!!! i enjoyed the app :)

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kishibe #1 Jun 17, 2023 04:22:27

bless you for giving a good fic 🙏

hzhfobsessed #2 Jun 15, 2023 15:03:11

Chapter 3: Oh the names are in there! Saebin and Jackson’s guild is called Yulong and the revenge guild is called dark river. Sorry if that wasn’t clear! I only put the names in saebin and Jackson’s relationship sections rather than the background “:D

hwangiy #3 Jun 15, 2023 02:43:22

Chapter 1: ksjdfd i have absolutely no knowledge on this but i am prepared to dedicate all my time to researching now : D

hzhfobsessed #4 Jun 14, 2023 19:38:51

Chapter 1: okay okay so i'm making my character right now but i've got a few questions.

so i want to make my character's main(?) ability be smth related to gambling and luck, but you said that ppl only have luck stats if they've cheated the system? i was wondering how one could cheat the system, and even if my character didn't cheat the system, could he still have luck-based abilities but maybe he just doesn't know what his luck stat is...? i do have a backup ability for him (i was going to make it just another ability he has, but it could be his main one if gambling doesn't work out LOL) but it would be less interesting LOL.

related question: do we need to have ALL the stats you listed or can we just have the ones that are related to their abilities? and what's the 'standard' (x/100, x/10, etc) for said stats? i don't usually do much with RPGs so i don't have any standards to compare against :")

i was also wondering where the story was going to go, in general. my character's backstory/motives are highly driven by revenge and i just made up a random guild that he wants revenge on, but i was sort of worried that it wouldn't fit into the story you had in mind hahaha.

raccwns #5 Jun 14, 2023 18:00:31

Chapter 1: K, I had no idea what a ranker novel was until I saw this but I'm already hooked

hzhfobsessed #6 Jun 13, 2023 04:14:07

ooooo this sounds so interesting! just out of curiosity, is the ranker system based on a particular book or movie? it sounds really similar to some systems in the infinite flow genre, which is popular in chinese webnovels, so i'm wondering if it comes from a similar background or smth