The Blue Ribbon

The Blue Ribbon

A lady with a blue ribbon around her neck was strollin in a park.

Suddenly, a handsome guy approached her.

"Good day My Lady, I was passing by and I cant help myself but to approach you.

My name is SungMin. How bout yours?" the guy said.

"My name is Crystal. Good day too." she replied.

"The ribbon around your neck is nice. Would you mind taking it off?" he asked.

"Yes, I do mind." she answered.

 

The next day, the lady is again walking around the park wearing the blue ribbon around her neck.

"So, we meet again." said SungMin.

"Yeah, I guess." Crystal replied.

"Would like to go out with me on a date?" SungMin asked.

"Of course! I would love to." She replied with a smile.

"There's the Blue Ribbon again. would you mind taking it of this time?" SungMin asked politely.

"I still do mind. Im sorry." she answered.

"What's with the Ribbon anyway? Is it your favorite?" he questioned.

"In time you'll know." she answered.

 

"How do you like the wine they have here?" SungMin inquired.

"Oh, its perfect." Crystal replied.

"And again, you are wearing the Blue Ribbon."  he said.

"So?" she asked.

"Since were already dating, can you tell me now what's with the ribbon?" he asked.

"In time you'll know." she responded.

 

Years passed. SungMin married Crystal not knowing anything about the Blue Ribbon.

On their Honeymoon.

"Dear, I have married you and I do love you. Now would you mind telling me about the Blue Ribbon?" he asked.

"In time my dear, you'll know. Please be patient." she responded.

 

Few more years went on, Crystal just gave birth to a cute baby boy.

"Dear, he's wonderful." SungMin said.

"Yes, indeed." she said.

"I've been married to you and now we have a child, can you please tell me about the ribbon around your neck?" SungMin asked.

"Its not yet the time my dear. In time you'll know. she answered.

 

Years has gone by, SungMin and Crystal grew old together.

They were sitting on a bench at the porch.

"Crystal, my dear. We are old, may things have changed but the Ribbon is still on you." Sungmin said.

"Does that matter?" She asked.

"It does, atleast to me. Please tell me, whats with the ribbon?" he said.

"Not yet the time my love. More patience, i ask." she told him.

 

In 2 months time, Crystal, got really sick and she was dying.

SungMin was on her side. They were talking about their memories.

"Dear, it has come to this. Atleast tell me the reason you've been wearing that ribbon all this time.." he said.

"Not yet, my dear, a lil bit more time is all i ask." Crystal whispered.

"I love you and im sorry SungMin. I'm leaving." she continued and those were her last words.

 

SungMin cried and he was really sad.

Then it occured to him, The Blue Ribbon!

Crystal was lying beside him motionless and dead. The ribbon is still tied around her neck though.

He decided to remove it.

Carefully , he untied it and he quickly pulled it off....

Then, Crystal's head rolled out on the floor.

 

 

 

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Hope you guys enjoyed it! :)

Its a lil crazy huh.. ;)

We were asked to write a mystery story, this is what i came up with.

Comments ar very much appreciated guys...! thank you for reading!

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suju26kamz
#1
Chapter 1: sungmin's bday is coming, I'm missing him more now so I'm re-reading this! ah, this as lovely as I first time I read it.
suju26kamz
#2
Chapter 1: I did not expect that! that gives me goosebumps but I love this! 💙
elf_shawol_sayA_sone #3
Chapter 1: Omg!well that was really scary.her head rolled on the floor!?!?!
I think sungmin would be now in a mental hospital recovering from the shock of this accident cause i am only reading it and i got scared lol
babyRinnie_
#4
Chapter 1: CREPPPYYYY!!!!
I hope her eyes wernt open! I would have ran crying!
fangirlattack #5
Okay this is freaky. I just clicked on the random story and I stumbled upon this. Nice story btw. :))
laira2010
#6
Thanks for reading and commenting you guys!!! love y'all! ;)
Xiaomei
#7
Omona~ i'm a bit scared bcoz of this lol ^^ haha
dream_keeper88
#8
o.O my first time reading something freaky as this<br />
kimeunmi #9
WTF? what's that?<br />
she lived her entire life like that?<br />
OMG...
xxstayawake
#10
LMAO i was hoping for a love story not a horror! HAHAH but good surprise I guess? LOL