Chapter 1: 🥰🥰🥰🥰

Chapter 1: oh my god. that was beautifully written PERIOD

Chapter 1: I love the implication of peter pan in this story. I sympathize with winter’s situation because it’s true that we keep holding on to something that greatly comforts our wounded heart. And no matter how childish that ‘comfort’ is to some, we shouldn’t jest about a situation we don’t even know how deep-rooted it came from. It won’t hurt to be more understanding to someone’s struggles. Who knows, we can actually save life from being an understanding person right?

Chapter 1: I never thought it would be this deep and profound. And the part where Giselle called Winter Wendy as a joke was a good way to show that if we only knew everything about other people, we'd probably be a lot more understanding. Giselle was just being a comforting best friend wanting to make light of Karina's situation, but I'm sure if she knew Winter's pain, she wouldn't see the humor in her joke too.

I also love how Karina was so patient with Winter, how she worked hard to eatn her trust, and how she didn't think less of Winter despite Winter's "childish" requests and actions. She loves Winter with her whole heart and while she has her own hopes of advancing their relationshop, she respects and supports Winter's own hopes.

And Winter, my heart just breaks for her. Honestly, I think everyone has a part of them that wants the same thing Winter does. Go back to the time they knew they were loved, the time when they never had to live through their pain everyday. It especially broke me because Winter seems to know it's impossible, that Peter Pan wasn't real. But she has to hold on to something right? She has to have something to believe in, or she wouldn't survive her childhood. But I'm relieved she has Karina who loves her with her whole heart.

As always, a great story from you. I've always loved the depth of your stories, but this one might just be my favorite so far. Thank you for writing wonderful stories.

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