Part 4: Shadow of the Past

A Kind of Magic
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13. Death

(Upright: Death reaps that which has run its course, allowing new life to grow in the space left behind.

Reversed: Death turns his back on his duty, allowing things to fester and rot in his negligence.)

 

The Devil rises from the chair he's sitting on, his aura threatening. Just like the card, the Arcana standing in front of them is a goat, his eyes glowing red, black horns on his head and black claws that would shred to pieces anything or anyone.

“Baekhyun and Soyoung... Welcome.”

“No need for small talk,” Baekhyun spits. “What do you want?”

“Don't be like that Baekhyun, you know I despise rudeness,” the goat says, his eyes glowing even more. “I am just asking for a favour. Nothing much, really.

“Let's get this out of the way then. Tell me what you want.”

The Devil starts to laugh, a sinister sound that only seems to make him appear even bigger and powerful in front of them.

“I don't want anything from you. We've already dealt, you and I.” He turns to the apprentice, a creepy smile on his face. “Soyoung.”

“No!” Baekhyun interrupts. “Listen to me, Soyoung. You can't believe in him, you-”

The Devil bangs his hand down on the table, silencing him.

“Manners, Baekhyun. Soyoung, what would you say if I offered you and your dear master a safe place to stay, away from everything? Wouldn't you like that?”

The apprentice sets her eyes on the Devil's, her answer clear in the silent room.

“No. Now and forever, my answer will always be no. We will stop you, once and for all. You will not meddle with our world anymore.”

From the corner of her eye, Soyoung sees the smile spreading on Baekhyun’s face. However, the Devil doesn't seem too pleased with her answer.

“You couldn't make this easy, could you?”

As he speaks, chains alight with black flames start to appear and crawl towards the two magicians.

“Why would we?” Baekhyun answers, “we just want you to stop interfering with our world. And we will stop you, here and now!”

He takes a step forward towards the Devil, who immediately lashes the chains out on them. Baekhyun quickly creates a magical shield, destroying the chains. But the thing is, more and more are created by the Devil, ready to be lashed out at the master and his apprentice. Soyoung is also casting spells, trying to destroy as many chains as she can. As the chains are still trying to defeat them, the Devil summons a thick wall of black fire, hurling it towards Baekhyun’s shield. It starts cracking, the force of the attack being too powerful, the strain visible in Baekhyun’s posture. Without thinking, Soyoung jumps between them just when the Devil hurls at them a second wall of black fire, taking the attack in full force. She staggers and drops on her knees, short of breath. It's so powerful... I feel like I was set on fire, as if the smoke was burning my lungs... But it soon disappears and Soyoung raises her head up

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eggsbeans
#1
Chapter 4: i enjoyed this! its a shame about the sad ending but it seems like its implied that one way or another she will get her memories and baekhyun back :’) which leads me to hoping you might write a sequel or more parts! If you ever decide to, i’ll be excited to read it!
Scarlet_Sky
#2
Chapter 4: I bookmarked this a while ago but somehow forgot since I rarely bookmark stories. dfjdkjffd pls excuse my late comment. You probably thought I was a silent reader or something. 😭

Your fic caught my attention because I can't get enough of fantasy AUs, especially when Baekhyun is involved (I'm a simp, I admit it).
I absolutely love the way you incorporated tarot cards into the story. It's very creative and goes well with the plot/setting. Also, I love tarot which makes it even better. 🥺💗 fdjkdg It's fascinating!
You brought the cards to life in this story. Baekhyun as the Magician is just *chef's kiss* 🥺 I also liked the Hermit!! BUT I got a bone to pick with the Devil 😒 HOW DARE HE jskfjdsk 😭😭
My heart hurts for Soyoung. She lost Baek and still hasn't found the answers she's after. 😢 Poor baby.
I hope she's successful and reunites with Baekhyun. She seemed confident at the end, so I don't doubt she'll succeed. ❤ Btw, Soyoung's and Baekhyun's subtle chemistry was adorable. I enjoyed it! 🥰

Would love to hear more about the world you created, but I assume you're not planning a sequel? In case you do, I would definitely be on board. 😄 The idea to incorporate tarot cards is great, I can't repeat it often enough!! Your English is perfect too, the sentences are fluid and easy to read.
May I ask what inspired you to write this story? 😊

Anyway, thank you for sharing this and have a nice evening!! 💗 I'm looking forward to more of your works in the future. 😙
PuffTedEBear
#3
Chapter 2: Sehun wants to become the devil? Well that explains why he fed Baekhyun raw garlic before lol. Sorry, I've been watching YT videos because I miss BBH.
They should make more TV or movies about tarot or runes. I have seen only a very small handful but it would be fascinating!
PuffTedEBear
#4
Chapter 1: This is very unusual so far. You wrote this for a class? How great is that!!!
Very intriguing, it sounds like the epic all hinges on this masquerade ball.
FrootLoopsR_A_lie
#5
Chapter 4: boyyy am I glad I found this omggg I can't begin to tell you just how much I loved this fic.
I read this at 3am so really, the imagery hit the spot and I felt some goosebumps ngl, YOUR WRITING STYLE IS SO PRETTY!!

I love the simple setup and the way you introduced characters seamlessly. Baekhyun/Soyoungs chemistry is so PERFECT. The subtle acknowledgement of their love and appreciation for each other is everything T_T
Also the tarot card descriptions add that extra bit of thrill, the descriptions low-key scared me lmao
I truly can't wait to read more from you. Keep writing and thank you so much for this wonderful fic, it's definitely going up there on some of my most favourite fics ever.
candyfizzbyun
#6
Chapter 4: Oh my gosh, I just want to say that I love this story! Your writing is very good, it flows so beautifully. Everything is vivid like a dream, the moment I started reading, I couldn't stop! (Well, I took breaks to write notes to leave this comment hehe).

I love Baekhyun's familiar, something about that snake makes me smile. It even suits him honestly.

(PS: Each description of the tarot cards helps me understand them more - and now I fear them (T-T) They have powers or something! It's unreal how relatable they can be.

Once again I am LOVING this flow of words. This is so pretty.

Whoa whoa whoa WAIT I wasn't expecting a murder!!! (Sorry I'm so loud, I'm locked in and it's only the first part)

Oh gosh, not him shuffling the cards (>///<) what a sight to see.

O.O why am I suddenly freaked out by Sehun right now, is this a horror movie?! (kidding... unless? I'm so intrigued tho, what the heck is happening o.o)

DID THEY USED TO DATE OR SOMETHING BECAUSE THEIR CLOSENESS IS SO CUTE AND SOFT I'M SO????

Why am I such a hermit >.< I am clueless on what all these details are leading up to, but I absolutely LOVE it!

Not me tearing up at the part 4, what the heck, WHY DID THEY HAVE TO FACE THE DEVIL. WTH NO BAEKHYUN COME BACK THIS HURTS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

I love this story, it broke my heart, but I enjoyed every minute reading it (and now it's almost 1am WHOOPS) thank you so much for posting this beautiful story (T-T) It was engaging, heartwarming, and emotional from start to finish. I am cheering Soyoung on in restoring her memories and finding Baekhyun again. Thank you so much for joining our contest with this lovely masterpiece!!!!! *showers the sprout with water* hehehe 💐💐💐💐💐💐