Well, the good thing is that I'm not crying. Yet. It will come soon, my emotions just need to... flow a little. And so also the bad thing is that I'm not crying, because then I would get this feeling out of my chest.
The first point for the song. Those lyrics are just so beautiful and you managed to fit them in your story greatly. The second point for the organisation; at first Jonghyun thought about their childhood, then all of those happy moments and lastly about his loss. His guilty, grief, sorrow... You had it all. The last point for those absolutely stunning metaphors and the overall deep feeling that Jonghyun did.
I just wonder what happened to Jonghyun after that night? The most beautiful thing actually was that he couldn't stop talking to Key. The image of that is absolutely hurting and piercing, but just so... beautiful. I don't have any other word to describe it, I'm sorry.
I told you that I'd cry later. Wasn't lying, now I am.
Oh gosh i'm crying so much. My heart is hurting for Jonghyun and Key. So beautifully written although it tore my heart to bits. I loved it, thank you <3
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