Talking To The Moon

Description

Jonghyun is talking to the moon on a cold night.

 

Inspired by Bruno Mars's song, Talking To The Moon

Foreword

A Storyline by Inesu

Title: Talking To The Moon

Length: One-shot

Song: Talking To The Moon – Bruno Mars

Warning: Character's death!

Disclaimer: I own nothing but this fanfic's plot.

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OblivionOfMisery
#1
Uuuuu~ TT^TT Y U. Y U MAKE ME CRY.
rusticroses #2
I was tearing when I read this ):
Omfg its so well written. Keep it up dear :]
Sunnysideofcookies
#3
So sad ;/
Jongkey is so angsty.... I love it >;)
This was really well written :D
Eleana
#4
Well, the good thing is that I'm not crying. Yet. It will come soon, my emotions just need to... flow a little. And so also the bad thing is that I'm not crying, because then I would get this feeling out of my chest.

The first point for the song. Those lyrics are just so beautiful and you managed to fit them in your story greatly. The second point for the organisation; at first Jonghyun thought about their childhood, then all of those happy moments and lastly about his loss. His guilty, grief, sorrow... You had it all. The last point for those absolutely stunning metaphors and the overall deep feeling that Jonghyun did.

I just wonder what happened to Jonghyun after that night? The most beautiful thing actually was that he couldn't stop talking to Key. The image of that is absolutely hurting and piercing, but just so... beautiful. I don't have any other word to describe it, I'm sorry.

I told you that I'd cry later. Wasn't lying, now I am.
phiiee #5
I didn't cry. *sniffles* I swear. *sobs*
Shinning_Star
#6
Although I know this is a oneshot i will subscribe just to keep it in my heart.
Shinning_Star
#7
Oh gosh i'm crying so much. My heart is hurting for Jonghyun and Key. So beautifully written although it tore my heart to bits. I loved it, thank you <3
keygakeun #8
This story is daebak, really magnificent and so beautiful.
oppar-
#9
That was so sad and beautiful. Jonghyun's thoughts were wrote out very beautifully.