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    「𝐅𝐎𝐑𝐓𝐔𝐍𝐀 포르투나」    𝐛𝐦'𝘀 𝐥𝐞𝐠𝐚𝐜𝐲  // closed   
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TRAINEE DATABASE: FEMALE


  BMGG36: CHÉRIE So, Hi! To clarify, after being reviewed, your character will be assigned to different status such as: Fixed Member (this means your character is chosen), Positively Considered (means your character is accepted),  Under Consideration (means your app has a few things to work on), Rejected (well it means.. rejected). If you have anything to ask, please do not hesitate to contact me! Fixed Member: Peony   BMGG36 POSSIBLE MEMBERS   Edelweiss: II   Iris: II   Peony: taken   Tulip: II   Daisy: I   Lilac: III。 Hyun Taera Positively Considered : Lilac   Hi Luna! First of all, thank you for being the first one to apply! You are very articulate in explaining who Chomin is, and I'm able to grasp the explanation very well. From what I see Chomin is a giant baby! And her personality make senses and leave a room for her to grow as a better person as she grows up. From her basics to personality to background, all good! Her trainee life too, understandable since all the trainees basically have to be better than the rest, and so does Chomin. Her personality really doesn't fit to everyone's cup of tea, and I like that! Chomin not looking when being called Yeona or Juyeon is probably one of the things we'll see many of her if she's chosen! And for the interview, as I stated on the app I need you to write it on the third person POV, basically you (as the writer) answer the questions yourself about how you think they'll feel about each questions. But from Chomin's answers, I can still understand her so I personally think it's fine. And her not having a love interest, I totally get it! She of course is still busy growing and finally understanding herself more.  And Chomin as a thriving tiktok queen is a great idea!! Can totally picture it. Overall, Chomin is accepted!  Seo Chomin Positively Considered: Edelweiss   Hi Ky! To start off, I want to thank you for applying! From what I've read so far //while writing this review// is that Serin is not the typical leader that I've seen, and that what makes her very much interesting. A leader that's kinda unapproachable and unfriendly at first, with walls thick enough she's sure that no one can break it. But then character development exists, and that's where I come in^^ And her personality is backed up well by the circumstances of her background, makes it reasonable for Serin to behave that way. I have a question though, does Serin have a stage name in Fortuna? Other than that, the rest of the app looks good to me! Overall, Serin is accepted! Jang Serin Positively Considered: Edelweiss   Hello Grace! Thank you for applying to this fic^^ First of all.. Jinsoul <3 She's so pretty really. And Felicity's basics are good, being the leader while also one of the shortest of the team sounds very cute to me lol. And her personality is so leader-like, the type to put herself out there to feel or know things firsthand, which makes her a dependable leader. And her downsides of being restless all the time really makes sense as she's a big burst of energy all the time. Ah I'd love to write how she gets the revelation that it's okay to rely to the girls sometimes and not let too much burden on her shoulder :( OUCH THE BACKGROUND, I didn't expect that tragic background of hers. But it made sense how she's a stronger person and likes to rely on herself and pleases others as much as she's able to. Her trivia is so fun to read! I like how I can imagine her in every trivia lol. I also can see how much effort she'll take to make sure that she and also the girls are handling the past well. And her beef with Brian would be funny to write too, lol. Felicity & Taera being the parents of the group? Sign me up.  And for the interview, as I stated on the app I need you to write it on the third person POV, basically you (as the writer) answer the questions yourself about how you think they'll feel about each questions. But this is no biggie, I can still understand her from your answers. Her relationship with Chan is so cute, I can imagine the drama when Felicity told him the truth about her circumstances. Overall, the rest of the app is great and Felicity is accepted! Felicity Lee Under Consideration....: Iris   Hi Liam! Thank you for sending in an application!    First things first, I am using Minsuh's backup faceclaim since I stated before on the cheatsheet to not use STAYC and Rocket Punch's faceclaim as I'm using both groups' works as the foundation of Fortuna and I don't want them to overlap.   I assume that her surname is 'Jeong' not 'Jeon' so please change her name on the title of your app.   Please remember that the girls are from 2036, so please change her birth year to the conversion year I already stated in the cheatsheet. You also wrote that she auditioned in 2015 with SNSD's I Got a Boy, so please aligned this with the year.   And for the personality, you said that she's the leader of the group, while the plotline you're applying is not the leader, so please fix this.   Minsuh's is the lead dancer, but her dance twin is VIVIZ' Eunha, which she's not a lead dancer. Please change to someone who's the lead dancer on their group.   On the 'Life in the Past' section, you mentioned that she didn't know any of the girls, yet she had been training for three
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hi all!!! so sorry that it's super late but i've done all the reviews! would probably write blurbs for each character's chosen for the reveal, similar to taera's teaser. please wait for it!

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starliet
#1
hi there!! i just wanted to let you know that i (finally) added to chomin's interview section! i kept her initial answers but i also added the the pov that you preferred. ik the stories closed now and it took me so long to add it, but i said that i will do it so i wanted to honor that. im aware its probably too late though, but i still wanted to let you know!
AccioNimbus2000
#2
Chapter 6: So excited to see the girls who are chosen! Good luck to everyone~
NewHaven
#3
Chapter 6: Hi there! Thanks for the kind review of Neeni! I'm glad you liked the "rebel for a good cause" concept, I had a lot of fun thinking about how travelling back in time would affect someone, who is used to being able to speak their mind on progressive topics. Sort of how some people say they were born in the wrong decade and would like to live in the 50s until you remind them that women's rights weren't great back then, but in this case even 10/20 years make a huge difference since Fortuna are famous and have to be more careful what they say.
It would be really interesting to see how she deals with missing her sister in the past - especially because her sister was the one who knew more about kpop and Neeni in the past would be cut off from her best information source. But hey, that's what all the documents for her and the members are for xD
Anyway, I'm really exicted for the member's blurbs! I really love when applyfics reveal characters with a bit of story like blurbs/teasers for the characters, so I really look forward to reading those and seeing who you choose :) Best of luck to everyone!!
ahnsequence
#4
oop,,, the about the girls page is hidden 👀
moonjellyfish
#5
Chapter 6: Hello, thank you so much for your kind review on Novelle! Looking forward to the reveal!

Wishing everyone the best of luck <3
starliet
#6
Chapter 6: wahh this is the first time ive checked in awhile and im so glad to see all the apps *_* its been pretty hectic for me lately but im still super excited for this!! good luck to everyone!
BlueSkySeeker
#7
Chapter 6: Off work and home, and managed to hop on long enough to fix everything you mentioned for Taeyeon. She should be good to go now!
wonpokemon
#8
Chapter 6: Oooh so many apps and cant wait for the blurs revealed!!
-yeonjungs
#9
Chapter 2: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1490393/2'>    「about the girls」    </a></span>
ahhhh thank you so much for the review! yes i wanted bogging to be dynamic and mean but complicated and intriguing. i didn’t know if eathan as a li was good but i wanted them to be unexpected but weirdly fitting and even more complicated for bia, who is so career oriented. thank u for liking her!
ahnsequence
#10
Chapter 6: thanks so much for the review! i'm glad you liked pulip and i'm glad that you came back to this story!! i'm very excited to see more of your writing and see how the story plays out :)