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「𝐅𝐎𝐑𝐓𝐔𝐍𝐀 포르투나」 𝐛𝐦'𝘀 𝐥𝐞𝐠𝐚𝐜𝐲 // closed
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TRAINEE DATABASE: FEMALE
BMGG36: CHÉRIE So, Hi! To clarify, after being reviewed, your character will be assigned to different status such as: Fixed Member (this means your character is chosen), Positively Considered (means your character is accepted), Under Consideration (means your app has a few things to work on), Rejected (well it means.. rejected). If you have anything to ask, please do not hesitate to contact me! Fixed Member: Peony BMGG36 POSSIBLE MEMBERS Edelweiss: II Iris: II Peony: taken Tulip: II Daisy: I Lilac: III。 Hyun Taera Positively Considered : Lilac Hi Luna! First of all, thank you for being the first one to apply! You are very articulate in explaining who Chomin is, and I'm able to grasp the explanation very well. From what I see Chomin is a giant baby! And her personality make senses and leave a room for her to grow as a better person as she grows up. From her basics to personality to background, all good! Her trainee life too, understandable since all the trainees basically have to be better than the rest, and so does Chomin. Her personality really doesn't fit to everyone's cup of tea, and I like that! Chomin not looking when being called Yeona or Juyeon is probably one of the things we'll see many of her if she's chosen! And for the interview, as I stated on the app I need you to write it on the third person POV, basically you (as the writer) answer the questions yourself about how you think they'll feel about each questions. But from Chomin's answers, I can still understand her so I personally think it's fine. And her not having a love interest, I totally get it! She of course is still busy growing and finally understanding herself more. And Chomin as a thriving tiktok queen is a great idea!! Can totally picture it. Overall, Chomin is accepted! Seo Chomin Positively Considered: Edelweiss Hi Ky! To start off, I want to thank you for applying! From what I've read so far //while writing this review// is that Serin is not the typical leader that I've seen, and that what makes her very much interesting. A leader that's kinda unapproachable and unfriendly at first, with walls thick enough she's sure that no one can break it. But then character development exists, and that's where I come in^^ And her personality is backed up well by the circumstances of her background, makes it reasonable for Serin to behave that way. I have a question though, does Serin have a stage name in Fortuna? Other than that, the rest of the app looks good to me! Overall, Serin is accepted! Jang Serin Positively Considered: Edelweiss Hello Grace! Thank you for applying to this fic^^ First of all.. Jinsoul <3 She's so pretty really. And Felicity's basics are good, being the leader while also one of the shortest of the team sounds very cute to me lol. And her personality is so leader-like, the type to put herself out there to feel or know things firsthand, which makes her a dependable leader. And her downsides of being restless all the time really makes sense as she's a big burst of energy all the time. Ah I'd love to write how she gets the revelation that it's okay to rely to the girls sometimes and not let too much burden on her shoulder :( OUCH THE BACKGROUND, I didn't expect that tragic background of hers. But it made sense how she's a stronger person and likes to rely on herself and pleases others as much as she's able to. Her trivia is so fun to read! I like how I can imagine her in every trivia lol. I also can see how much effort she'll take to make sure that she and also the girls are handling the past well. And her beef with Brian would be funny to write too, lol. Felicity & Taera being the parents of the group? Sign me up. And for the interview, as I stated on the app I need you to write it on the third person POV, basically you (as the writer) answer the questions yourself about how you think they'll feel about each questions. But this is no biggie, I can still understand her from your answers. Her relationship with Chan is so cute, I can imagine the drama when Felicity told him the truth about her circumstances. Overall, the rest of the app is great and Felicity is accepted! Felicity Lee Under Consideration....: Iris Hi Liam! Thank you for sending in an application! First things first, I am using Minsuh's backup faceclaim since I stated before on the cheatsheet to not use STAYC and Rocket Punch's faceclaim as I'm using both groups' works as the foundation of Fortuna and I don't want them to overlap. I assume that her surname is 'Jeong' not 'Jeon' so please change her name on the title of your app. Please remember that the girls are from 2036, so please change her birth year to the conversion year I already stated in the cheatsheet. You also wrote that she auditioned in 2015 with SNSD's I Got a Boy, so please aligned this with the year. And for the personality, you said that she's the leader of the group, while the plotline you're applying is not the leader, so please fix this. Minsuh's is the lead dancer, but her dance twin is VIVIZ' Eunha, which she's not a lead dancer. Please change to someone who's the lead dancer on their group. On the 'Life in the Past' section, you mentioned that she didn't know any of the girls, yet she had been training for three
BMGG36: CHÉRIE So, Hi! To clarify, after being reviewed, your character will be assigned to different status such as: Fixed Member (this means your character is chosen), Positively Considered (means your character is accepted), Under Consideration (means your app has a few things to work on), Rejected (well it means.. rejected). If you have anything to ask, please do not hesitate to contact me! Fixed Member: Peony BMGG36 POSSIBLE MEMBERS Edelweiss: II Iris: II Peony: taken Tulip: II Daisy: I Lilac: III。 Hyun Taera Positively Considered : Lilac Hi Luna! First of all, thank you for being the first one to apply! You are very articulate in explaining who Chomin is, and I'm able to grasp the explanation very well. From what I see Chomin is a giant baby! And her personality make senses and leave a room for her to grow as a better person as she grows up. From her basics to personality to background, all good! Her trainee life too, understandable since all the trainees basically have to be better than the rest, and so does Chomin. Her personality really doesn't fit to everyone's cup of tea, and I like that! Chomin not looking when being called Yeona or Juyeon is probably one of the things we'll see many of her if she's chosen! And for the interview, as I stated on the app I need you to write it on the third person POV, basically you (as the writer) answer the questions yourself about how you think they'll feel about each questions. But from Chomin's answers, I can still understand her so I personally think it's fine. And her not having a love interest, I totally get it! She of course is still busy growing and finally understanding herself more. And Chomin as a thriving tiktok queen is a great idea!! Can totally picture it. Overall, Chomin is accepted! Seo Chomin Positively Considered: Edelweiss Hi Ky! To start off, I want to thank you for applying! From what I've read so far //while writing this review// is that Serin is not the typical leader that I've seen, and that what makes her very much interesting. A leader that's kinda unapproachable and unfriendly at first, with walls thick enough she's sure that no one can break it. But then character development exists, and that's where I come in^^ And her personality is backed up well by the circumstances of her background, makes it reasonable for Serin to behave that way. I have a question though, does Serin have a stage name in Fortuna? Other than that, the rest of the app looks good to me! Overall, Serin is accepted! Jang Serin Positively Considered: Edelweiss Hello Grace! Thank you for applying to this fic^^ First of all.. Jinsoul <3 She's so pretty really. And Felicity's basics are good, being the leader while also one of the shortest of the team sounds very cute to me lol. And her personality is so leader-like, the type to put herself out there to feel or know things firsthand, which makes her a dependable leader. And her downsides of being restless all the time really makes sense as she's a big burst of energy all the time. Ah I'd love to write how she gets the revelation that it's okay to rely to the girls sometimes and not let too much burden on her shoulder :( OUCH THE BACKGROUND, I didn't expect that tragic background of hers. But it made sense how she's a stronger person and likes to rely on herself and pleases others as much as she's able to. Her trivia is so fun to read! I like how I can imagine her in every trivia lol. I also can see how much effort she'll take to make sure that she and also the girls are handling the past well. And her beef with Brian would be funny to write too, lol. Felicity & Taera being the parents of the group? Sign me up. And for the interview, as I stated on the app I need you to write it on the third person POV, basically you (as the writer) answer the questions yourself about how you think they'll feel about each questions. But this is no biggie, I can still understand her from your answers. Her relationship with Chan is so cute, I can imagine the drama when Felicity told him the truth about her circumstances. Overall, the rest of the app is great and Felicity is accepted! Felicity Lee Under Consideration....: Iris Hi Liam! Thank you for sending in an application! First things first, I am using Minsuh's backup faceclaim since I stated before on the cheatsheet to not use STAYC and Rocket Punch's faceclaim as I'm using both groups' works as the foundation of Fortuna and I don't want them to overlap. I assume that her surname is 'Jeong' not 'Jeon' so please change her name on the title of your app. Please remember that the girls are from 2036, so please change her birth year to the conversion year I already stated in the cheatsheet. You also wrote that she auditioned in 2015 with SNSD's I Got a Boy, so please aligned this with the year. And for the personality, you said that she's the leader of the group, while the plotline you're applying is not the leader, so please fix this. Minsuh's is the lead dancer, but her dance twin is VIVIZ' Eunha, which she's not a lead dancer. Please change to someone who's the lead dancer on their group. On the 'Life in the Past' section, you mentioned that she didn't know any of the girls, yet she had been training for three
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