Lips of an Angel Completed!

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OliZsUmmErZ  on says about chapter 1:
Sweet! So sweet! It really fif the song justice :)

miraei610  on says about chapter 1:
the story really fit the song...
its so hard to move on:(

iamandie  on says about chapter 1:
there will always be that one person we'd love that we can never forget and will always love regardless how many times we say "i move on".

samuraigirl  on says:
ohyeahhhsecrets said it for me. =) Can't get that image out of my head now. This is amazing!

shiny0612  on says:
For some reason now, rereading this sort of reminds me of their new title track "Blue" instead of "Lips of an Angel" because it adds on to the sorrow and pain that exists in this story. At first, i thought Elise was annoying for making him feeling that way and not being able to move on but now I feel sorry for her. I realize that they must've indeed have a strong connection. How many girls do you know that stay this close to their ex, to the point of calling them for current relationship troubles? I think it shows that they care very much about each other to do that.
Great one shot. Love it <3

ohyeahhhsecrets  on says:
A confused Tabi is my favorite, because i imagine his intense glare, his quivering lips, and all that.

so smexy.

mytwistedsunshine  on says:
excited to read this one!!! hahah! :)

jayneezie  on says:
I love it. It gives me the Tabi feels.
<3<3<3<3

Lyanna  on says:
my gawd... TOP and Ellie's situation is so screwed up but i know for a fact that this situation happens, and happens to a lot of people i know too!!... i am so glad i am over that 20s decade and married... no more such nonsense to wreck havoc with my emotions... nice story though.. i could feel my heart ache for both of them

OptimusFanGirl  on says:
This depressed me, but in a good way.
I think you gave me an idea for my own story :)

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