Chapter 22: Your work never dissapoints me. I love this oneeeeee

Chapter 22: Been coming back here since idk anymore. I really like the story 🫂

God the story was intense but also not so. Their relationship was so unique and beautiful. The way you characterised each one of them was good. I loved reading this story.
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story ❤️

Chapter 22: I know i was so late to finish reading this story....but the end is so beautiful! Glad that it went happyy :))

Gonna save this story first so i can read it later agshjsks

Chapter 22: Gosh, i felt like on a roller-coaster

Chapter 5: HOLY. . YES. YES. YES. YES. YES. YES!!!!!!!!! HOLY I WILL GIVE YOU A THOUSAND KISSES IF I ING COULD - HOLY YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!! godddddd YES I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!! this reminds me of my favourite webtoon ever (bastard) in which basically the male protagonist’s father is a psycho-murderer, and has been since he was a young kid - I really love how it explores the psychology of the male protagonist, specifically how he’s obviously AGAINST what his father does but it’s also all he’s ever known and there’s a massive conflict between being a good v bad person - AND WHEN U WROTE THAT THERE WAS AN INSIDIOUS PART OF HIM THAT ENJOYED WHAT HE HAD BEEN DOING TO HIS MOTHER JUST UGHHH THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD???? And the portray of haemi as his last flicker of hope in being a good person??? YES?????? I’m so hyped for this omgggg I cannot my mind is blown bc I really really really enjoy psychological thrillers and the fact that you’ve written a complex sehun just makes me want to scream out of happiness holy I AM READY FOR THE ANGST AND THE TORTURE MY HEART IS OPEENNNNNNNNN

Chapter 4: .........sehun bro u reckon you’re the one losing it??? YOU??? WHAT ABOUT MEEE??? words... WORDS CANNOT EXPLAIN....... MANNNN this chapter only reminds me of how much the exlovers au is soooo underrated? there’s something so freaking romantic about how well they know each other (his mental estimation of 4-5 shots and when she’s screaming his old pet name) it’s aksjdldkls i really really really love your portrayal of their relationship here 😭 and I LOVE MORE THE FINAL SENTENCE OF THIS CHAPTER — i love that he’s resisting it, that he sees her hold on him as some sort of weakness because there’s so much characterisation in that omg???? i love his personality so much here 😭 i really really can’t wait to learn about their divorce/marriage + i love that this plot also centres around sehun’s murderer father like PLEASE the tension is insane??? perhaps his father/mother were a central reason of their divorce??? I JUST CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT!! I love your writing so much! i notice that this story is only 45K and I was somewhat confused because I couldn’t even imagine a story w this plot being written in so few words but??? holy ??? you really really know how to pace things and every detail that we need is all there?? GODDD YOURE AMAZING IT BOGGLES MY MIND ❤️❤️❤️

Chapter 2: omgg!!! i’ve been meaning to read this story as i subbed a while ago. i’m only at the second chapter and i’m already in love!!! i cannot express how much i LOVE everything you’ve set out so far - i’m such a freaking er for sehun but even more so when he is this mf weird freak who likes to scare people - THE SENTENCE YOU’VE WRITTEN WHERE HE’S EXCITED FOR HIS NEW EDITOR JUST SO THAT HE CAN GAIN MORE INSPIRATION/CREATIVITY WAS SOO GOOD???? I just... i don’t know i find his character so interesting already and i’m so so excited to see how he’ll develop!!!

ALSO HELLO???? HAEMI AND SEHUN???? the flashbacks??? god i love the structure of your chapters and the little snippets of their past. it really really builds tension because im dying to know what happened when they divorced, what kinds of problems they faced when they eloped and especially how they get find love again KAHDKSJA IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS FIC!!! plus your writing flows so well and it’s just so easy to read. i especially love ur chapter lengths LOL BSHDHS BUT ANYWAY this fic is so good already i love how unique the plot is!!!! AAHHHHH PLEASE EXPECT A LOT OF COMMENTS HEHE ❤️❤️❤️❤️