Paradise. Lost.

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Foreword

 

 

 

AUTHOR'S NOTE
This is a work of fiction. The author has written this weird story under the influence of lack of sleep. Stay safe. And stay healthy.

 

(TRIGGER) WARNINGS
None.

 

 

 

 

jaeho_xchange
Final week, fic two! Enjoy reading lovely readers and as usual - leave lots of love for our dear authors!

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dongbangcm #1
Chapter 1: This was really beautiful T^T It has the same raw energy as Paradise has, really fitting...
I liked how you left some things for the reader to figure out, to fill in the blanks, I did at least...
And ah it's really touching to read how Jaejoong knows they're meant to be, but only when they're both ready, that he will always wait for his other half, no matter how long ;; And about others' expectations, and how they share those too sometimes, but in the end they make an unexpected couple with so much to give.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us, author-nim <'3
Kamoi4 #2
Chapter 1: It's poetry, just like the song! I love it ❤️
Cherrynis
#3
Chapter 1: TT...this is sad. I would preserve even if the paradise is lost...at least I have a memory of it~ thanks for writing author-nim and thanks for sharing, mods.
Kattan69 #4
Chapter 1: Poor Jae....so sad that they spilt up.
LoveTwentyFour
#5
Chapter 1: on one part, it felt like i was reading my own struggles. jaejoong extremely felt like myself during and after a relationship w my "soulmate" (not anymore, he's not worth my time anymore). so it's nice reading his rambles???/inner thoughts???

on the other hand, this year's round is filled w too much angst D: while i really love reading angst and the feeling of my heart breaking, i do hope in the next few days there will be happy stories~
HalmonieYJ
#6
Chapter 1: ;A; I felt this in so many ways;;;; even when it's a work of fiction, I always wondered how much hurt JJ was, or at least from what I saw back in the time;;;; like, it was painfully obvious how hurt he was, but we never saw him the whole time and if what he show was all of his pain or just a small piece of how he really felt;;;;
jjbrownsugga #7
Chapter 1: Thank you for sharing your story with us.
nasuha_
#8
Chapter 1: Sad againnnn ?????
maggiechan #9
Chapter 1: Another story of jaejoong (woman) pinning on yunho (man) unable to move on? Sigh, I really long for a story in which the woman is strong. Jaeho_xchange used to be my "go to" author to read fanfics of a strong Jaejoong. What happened?