Look At Me

Description

A 20-year old Shuhua strives to make a living out of a modeling career, especially when she found out that Seo Soojin, her senior, has already been a major name in the modeling world. What will Shuhua find along her journey?

(This AU fanfiction is based and inspired by the behind picture of Shuhua and Soojin's scene in the 'Oh My God' MV.)

Foreword

As a (G)I-DLE fanboy and a shipper of SooShu/ShuJin, this is my first one-shot fanfic also for celebrating their successful comeback with 'Oh My God'. What inspired me to write this fanfic was because of the behind picture of Shuhua and Soojin's scene, so it seems like my imagination just can't leave them be.

But I do hope all of you love it, I'm open for critics and inputs so please don't hesitate to say so. Don't forget to kindly leave comments and hit upvote if you enjoyed reading it!

Author's Thoughts
SirGale
Lastly, apologies if the one-shot felt somewhat rushed. It's been too long since I last wrote a fanfic so I got kinda rusty :(
But there's a lot that can be developed from this story if the readers want me to do so, so I'll try my best
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Revenga #1
Chapter 1: I love sooshu and this was really cool. I hope to read more of you.
Erika1987 #2
I liked it
Not_Rio #3
Hi, I quite enjoyed this and encourage you to write more! I rarely see fanboys writing and it’s really refreshing! If you don’t mind I’d voice some criticism.

It felt a bit rushed in the end, they met in person for the second time (Although going to the same school before) and suddenly there’s the backhug and kiss.

Idk it would’ve been nice if they had a bit more time and encounters/dialogue, with each other and others, before realizing they like one another and acting on it, you know what I mean?

When models go to auditions they wear simple clothing and no makeup so the people have a very neutral first impression and can envision their look and ideas better. Makeup and clothing fitting the job will likely be provided by the company that’s casting, if needed.

Look at the way you posted it, make a foreword and description and then post the thing in a new chapter, maybe ditch the colors and use cursive letters for texting, I’d suggest, it’s easier to read.

Other than that this is a really nice, short piece, hoping to see more from you soon!
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