"Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind"

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"...when there’s you being all mister perfect and me the ugly nobody that always gets laughed at. "

Foreword

Hi, people

So it's my very first post on anything and i just want some constructive criticsm and maybe some praises if you think that it's worthy of one. Please take your time to read it, i would be extremely greatful. Its going to only be a short one shot

And if you do take your time to read it please dont hesitate to comment on it and tell me where i can improve on.

p.s

im a jongkey addict and yeah I want my very post to be about them so here it goes...

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ilabya21 #1
interesting~
shineeshipper #2
Chapter 1: Oh mah gosh, all your fics are just .ugh they're all so fluffy, u write perfect fluff ok.
Shawol360 #3
Chapter 1: Awe, so fluffy and cute!
eunhaeshipper15 #4
Chapter 1: That was great! I loved the way you described everything. ^^ Off to read your other stories. :DD
phiiee #5
I read this once before I had an account and I read it again.
Never failed to amaze me <3
How can Key ever think he's ugly D: He's super beautiful!
I love the happy ending. Makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside :3
Shinning_Star #6
... so sweeet oh it's so good! I'm glad i read this ^.^
xElpidaHopex #7
Incredible! I really love your writing style. I just had a wide smile on my face while reading this. I think I fell in love <3
I would like to read more from you :):)
So amazing, lovely.
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