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Hey everyone, I am so sorry that the progress of this story is quite slow, and I hardly post the update; making it worse. But I really hope I could work on this properly despite my packed schedule. I'll try to be better each day, thus I deeply thank all of you who anticipates for this fic!

 

 

9.

 

I turn my head to the sneezing sound that comes from the office, and since I know very well of the fact that the person inside would not really favour of my presence, I tip on my toes and hide behind the closed door. My neck cranes to check on her inside; apparently Ga Eul is sitting on her chair with a box of tissue placed right by her laptop. She keeps pulling out one piece after another, as if she is watching a sad movie or something emotional. And that sight gives me a strange feelings – of concerned, sorry yet touched – as I know the reason behind why she caught a cold in the middle of summer.

It was last night when she gave me a lift in her Volvo;

We arrive home but it is still raining cat and dog outside, making me hesitate to come out from the car after thanking her – as I didn’t bring an umbrella or anything that could cover me from those drops. But whatever, it wouldn’t be any harm if I just run through it. However right at the moment where my hand touches the door handle, Ga Eul stopped me.

“There’s an umbrella below your seat. You can take that.”

Thus I do as what she said then points to outside, though she is checking on her phone, not even glancing at me. “Okay then again, thank you.” Once more when I was about to get out from the car, my action halts, this time voluntary by myself. I pivot facing her, tilting my head, “You aren’t coming?”

“I will, after I make a call. You should go first.”

“And you have an umbrella for you, right?”

She blows a raspberry, and even Ga Eul isn’t looking at me, I see her eyes roll, “Of course. Just go, I’ll take care of myself.”

And that’s where she tell lies.

I had already get myself ready to take a shower – clothes off, towels around waist – when suddenly I heard the flips and flops of someone running upstairs in the heavy pour. Thus I peeked from the panes, witnessing Ga Eul only sheltering herself by using those small pair of hands, and not the umbrella she claimed she had one for herself before.

That night I foolishly believe those words and ran out in the rain by myself, with the one and only umbrella that she had in her car.

“I suggest you go in there and talk to her if you’re already worried sick like this.”

As how he always does, Baekhyun pops out from nowhere and leans against the wall beside me. He wiggles his brows, lips stretching a cheeky grin, still not giving up in teasing me on this new person. Ever since the day he almost ran over us with that motorbike, Baekhyun keeps insisting that there is something going on between us, which is quite impossible to happen.

Perhaps yes, I have a little crush on her.

But have any of those crush things ever work? Yes, in a perfect world but what a bummer, this is reality.

Not to forget, the lady is currently in a love relationship which strengthen the reason why I should ignore this tingling feelings and make it fade.

And so I give that friend of mine a mocking titter over his unfunny joke before patting his shoulder a bit roughly, “How about you, the boss, giving a day off to an unwell employee? Sounds like a nice idea, huh? Mr. Byun?”

From behind, I could hear soft grunts from Baekhyun and even I am not looking, I know that those lips of his are pouting as he sighs, “You could be harsh sometimes, Jongdae.”

“I’m a really nice person, honey.” I turn to him to mock a bow then shrugs as I pivot my way forward again. “I’m going to the pharmacy, and you should knock that door. Talk to her, because at least she’d listen to you.”

 

 

“I guess that’s it for today,” Ga Eul breathes and beams to the class for a few seconds before placing one hand on her chest and clears her sore throat for the umpteenth time today, “Class, dismiss.”

Meanwhile from the outside, one person finds that he couldn’t take his eyes off the tutor, still worrying of the former’s health yet too nervous to face her this time. Unlike in the past, this time Jongdae refuses to be ignored again. He thought he has already used to it – getting cold treatment

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!