bonne nuit, mon amour

chobom, chobom ❤️

“Good night, unnie,” There was fatigue in her voice, a little impatient but still loving. 

 

It was too easy for Chorong to notice the tired tone in Bomi’s voice, but she couldn’t quite make out what was at fault.

 

It was probably from work anyways, with Bomi’s recent promotion and the replacement of a new boss. Chorong knew that new changes can always be daring, but the two had promised each other that they wouldn’t bring any talk of work back home, to avoid any unnecessary conflict. Home was their own little haven, someplace to escape from the annoyingly demanding world outside, someplace to escape from all the ty people they had to deal with every day. This was for them. 

 

Still, it was in her nature to worry, and Chorong would swear by her bones to protect Bomi from harm.

 

She tried to shake it off, when Bomi interrupted her thoughts with a soft breath.

 

“Sweet dreams.”

 

But she could still hear the warmth in Bbom’s voice, the same temperature as the fingers between her own.

 

And that was all she ever really needed, so Chorong just squeezed Bomi’s hand with hers, hoping the younger girl could hear the silent I love you, and closed her eyes.

 

She waited, wondering if it wasn’t loud enough for Bomi to hear.

 

Then she felt those thin lips touch the small of her forehead, ever so gently, and Chorong gave a small smile.

 

Bomi always heard.

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matterofseconds
It's a really crazy time out there.. hope everyone is staying safe and your families are well!
I have so much time on my hands, it's a crime that I'm not writing every day... no promises but I will be working harder on updating!
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ckaz99
#1
Chapter 6: uwu uwu I.. uwu
the attention to the little moments is what I love >///<
staying over, the heated dizziness of alcohol.. a soft kinda night with someone warm.. absolutely lovely to read :)) thank you for this! thank you for writing~ ah it just makes me smile so much each time haha, hope you're doing okay <3
ckaz99
#2
Chapter 5: AHH you remind me why I love these sweet and short lovely pieces that pick me up in a heartbeat :3 Written so well that I can't help smiling asdkfsajfdksa.. perfectly fluffy.. perfectly warm.. their haven in each other relieves their fatigue.. awwww!! >.< mhm it's just so good~ thank you so much <3
WavingPanda
#3
Chapter 3: The culmination of a struggle, the bravery that comes out of love; all of these intense background sentiments from a love story, constricted in less than 100 words and done in a superb manner. Lovely.
pandanonymous
#4
Chapter 4: These little pieces as you call them are utterly adorable and are just the perfect amount of words when u’re in for a quick chobom heart fluttering ride. Thank you so much for this!! <3
ckaz99
#5
Chapter 4: This is too pure aghh another soft smile to my face. I think I’ve just discovered that poetry may be a weakness of mine uwu

I could just read this again and again~~ The beat or rhythm of it is pretty addicting too I must say.. /happy sighs/ I feel content :)
ckaz99
#6
Chapter 3: omoooo shoot, this one made me gasp. Seriously, these short pieces are succinct and gorgeous. It's poetic but it also paints things in a simple and beautiful manner which I personally love, focusing on little moments and the great impact they can have. The delicateness of those feelings. Moments to treasure, moments to remember...

And they flow smoothly together even though they don't go along a common way of storytelling. Bomi's heart is weighed down.. It's as if she's run away before, and this is some sort of reunion or a second chance. It makes me think about whether I'll see a behind story unfold through this, like tying one moment to the next~ Thank you for writing these :)
ckaz99
#7
Chapter 2: I... !! (hiccup) I love it, gosh. Such sweetness, such moments. I instantly smiled when I saw how short it was because I already had a gut feeling it would be good ^^ It took you less than 2 sentences to make me go gaga and heart eyes... This is just so beautiful... I love your writing.
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 1: asdasasafda this is so sweeet~ ahh this made me smile so much. Peaceful and warm. A simple moment portrayed with such beauty, and the delicateness of everything Chorong does with Bomi's feelings /happy sighs/ I love this you know
Apinkwhore
#9
Chapter 1: A bit short and I honestly want more, it looks like I'm reading a poem or something (: .

Another author to look out to, hope to read more stories from you. Thanks for writing this one.
jjongshoe
#10
Chapter 1: (\__/)
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I think this bunny can tell you how I felt while reading