the first

chobom, chobom ❤️

“Bbom,” the elder girl’s voice was soft as feather, calling out to her lover gently, while tracing Bomi’s bare skin with the very tip of her finger. The younger one could feel tingles of her nerves where Chorong’s finger had last touched, leaving a trail of flaring hot electricity down her spine.

 

She could probably die right now.

 

“Bbom,” Chorong called again. “It’s spring today. Look outside.”

 

And she did. Her window oversaw a quiet park by the side of the Han River, where hummingbirds would spend mornings composing songs by the trees next to the walk paths. White and light pink flowers boomed shyly across the tree branches that covered the sight, a sea of petals decorating the soft spring morning.

 

Chorong tucked her chin onto Bomi’s shoulder, rubbing her cheek softly against hers. Bomi was used to the temperature of Chorong’s skin before, but the heat of their contact lead an unfamiliar wave of warmth that set over her insides, and she’d never felt more complete.

 

And when Chorong spoke, it felt like her voice would forever echo through her bones.

 

 “It’s our first spring together. Isn’t that funny? Our cho-bom.” The elder one chuckled.

 

They weren’t straightforward words, but Bomi understood what she meant because she was Bomi and she was Chorong and they just existed with knowing each other like that.

 

Cho-bom.

 

The first spring.

 

Bomi’s first time falling in love, her first time being in love, and her first time being loved. 

 

Pink blossoms never seemed so warm until today.

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matterofseconds
It's a really crazy time out there.. hope everyone is staying safe and your families are well!
I have so much time on my hands, it's a crime that I'm not writing every day... no promises but I will be working harder on updating!
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ckaz99
#1
Chapter 6: uwu uwu I.. uwu
the attention to the little moments is what I love >///<
staying over, the heated dizziness of alcohol.. a soft kinda night with someone warm.. absolutely lovely to read :)) thank you for this! thank you for writing~ ah it just makes me smile so much each time haha, hope you're doing okay <3
ckaz99
#2
Chapter 5: AHH you remind me why I love these sweet and short lovely pieces that pick me up in a heartbeat :3 Written so well that I can't help smiling asdkfsajfdksa.. perfectly fluffy.. perfectly warm.. their haven in each other relieves their fatigue.. awwww!! >.< mhm it's just so good~ thank you so much <3
WavingPanda
#3
Chapter 3: The culmination of a struggle, the bravery that comes out of love; all of these intense background sentiments from a love story, constricted in less than 100 words and done in a superb manner. Lovely.
pandanonymous
#4
Chapter 4: These little pieces as you call them are utterly adorable and are just the perfect amount of words when u’re in for a quick chobom heart fluttering ride. Thank you so much for this!! <3
ckaz99
#5
Chapter 4: This is too pure aghh another soft smile to my face. I think I’ve just discovered that poetry may be a weakness of mine uwu

I could just read this again and again~~ The beat or rhythm of it is pretty addicting too I must say.. /happy sighs/ I feel content :)
ckaz99
#6
Chapter 3: omoooo shoot, this one made me gasp. Seriously, these short pieces are succinct and gorgeous. It's poetic but it also paints things in a simple and beautiful manner which I personally love, focusing on little moments and the great impact they can have. The delicateness of those feelings. Moments to treasure, moments to remember...

And they flow smoothly together even though they don't go along a common way of storytelling. Bomi's heart is weighed down.. It's as if she's run away before, and this is some sort of reunion or a second chance. It makes me think about whether I'll see a behind story unfold through this, like tying one moment to the next~ Thank you for writing these :)
ckaz99
#7
Chapter 2: I... !! (hiccup) I love it, gosh. Such sweetness, such moments. I instantly smiled when I saw how short it was because I already had a gut feeling it would be good ^^ It took you less than 2 sentences to make me go gaga and heart eyes... This is just so beautiful... I love your writing.
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 1: asdasasafda this is so sweeet~ ahh this made me smile so much. Peaceful and warm. A simple moment portrayed with such beauty, and the delicateness of everything Chorong does with Bomi's feelings /happy sighs/ I love this you know
Apinkwhore
#9
Chapter 1: A bit short and I honestly want more, it looks like I'm reading a poem or something (: .

Another author to look out to, hope to read more stories from you. Thanks for writing this one.
jjongshoe
#10
Chapter 1: (\__/)
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I think this bunny can tell you how I felt while reading