✻ ✼ ❈ ✮ Champagne Reviews & Beta Shop ✻ ✼ ❈ ✮ Accepting Requests

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Let's pop some champagne and grab a book, aye!

I'm kidding, don't actually pop champagne... Unless you're of age then sure.

ANYWAY, let's move on.

Here, I offer review and beta-reading services. I want nothing more than for you to grow as a writer so boo, I got you. We're going to learn together, alright? I sound pretty chill now because I'm generally a chill person but as a reviewer and beta-reader, I'm going to be blunt and critical. Ya girl hates sugar-coating so there's not going to be any of that here. Of course, I'll be constructive and I'll definitely point out your strengths too. Ultimately, I'll be reviewing from 3 point of views - as a reader, reviewer and a writer. Ultimately, doing this will help me too as a writer so really, it's a win-win situation. So if any of that resonates with you then send in a request!

But first, here are some rules:

 

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Rules:

1. Subscribing is mandatory. You are more than welcomed to unsubscribe after I've completed your request. Upvoting is optional but greatly appreciated.

2. I may take some time to complete your request, depending on the length of your story so please have mercy on me. But I'll provide you with an estimated date of completion once I get to your request.

3. I might reject your request if need be but that's highly unlikely.

4. Request as many times as you'd like.

5. Please credit me within 1 week of completion of your request.

6. Please pick up your request within 5 days and more importantly, please leave some feedback. I want to know if I've helped you in any way.

7. For beta services, I prefer to work on google docs. However, if that's not possible, do let me know. Nevertheless, your beta request will be further discussed through private message.

8. For beta services, do not transfer the karma points until I give you the green light.

9. Comment below to request.

 

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Important!

1. There will be only a few slots available for both services (refer to Request List chapter). Once the list is full, you'll have to wait for the next batch.

2. I'm open to all genres, even Rated M and triggering content. HOWEVER, if your story contains , I will not review the specific scenes. I will focus on the rest of your plot. Aside from that, I will not review PWP. I can't man. I'm of age but I feel awkward reviewing such stories so... sorry about that fam.

3. I accept all pairings and all lengths. I will be doing chapter by chapter reviews (thus why your reviews might take a while) so yeah.

4. I accept stories outside of AFF as well.

5. Your stories do not need to be published yet, as long as I've got access.

6. I don't do reviews for graphics. Neither do I use a grading system. Also, for reviews, I'm one to focus more on other aspects such as your plot and character development as compared to your grammar and vocabulary. HOWEVER, if you'd like me to have more emphasis on your grammar and vocabulary, do indicate.

7. If you aren't able to pay for the beta services, do pm me and I'll see if we can work something out.

7. Lastly, I will not review or beta-read any stories revolving around Seungri, Jonghyun (CN Blue), Junhyung (Highlight) and Jung Joon Young. I'm sorry, I can't.

 

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Prices:

Reviews - Free

Beta-Reading - 10 Karma Points per 3000-word count

Foreword Beta Reading: Free

 

If there's anything I didn't cover above, feel free to ask me :)

 

 

Foreword

Form for Review:

Author & Link:

Co Author & Link (if any):

Story Title & Link:

Is it Rated M? If yes, state type of content:

Type (Chaptered / Oneshot):

Status (Ongoing / Completed):

How many chapters do you want to be reviewed:

Any questions or specific things you want me to focus on:

Have you subscribed:

Anything else:

 

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Forms for Beta Services:

Author & Link:

Story Title & Link:

Is it Rated M? If yes, state type of content:

Type (Chaptered / Oneshot):

Status (Ongoing / Completed):

Have you subscribed:

Anything else:

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DongBang5hinKi
#1
I'd love to get a review! But the last time you were active/updated this was 2019...so maybe you are no longer offering, but I will still put it up here (^w^)
Author & Link: DongBang5hinKi
https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/u/DongBang5hinKi
Story Title & Link: The Dokkaebi
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1488063/the-dokkaebi
Rated M/trigger warning for abuse (not ual), death and torture
Type: Chaptered
Status: Completed
Review as much as you want to.
Focus on scenery, character development and method of story telling.
Subscribed!
Thank you for offering this, even tho I don't know if you are still doing this (^-^)'
Moonshiner #2
Chapter 1: Hi! I need someone to read my story and give some advice, I am afraid my readers will find it all over the place.
Author: Monnshiner, https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1900944

Story name : Sea in your eyes

Review

Type : chartered
Status : ongoing
Non rated m story
Subbed!

Xoxo
pawlinne17
#3
hi. are you still taking requests?
DeadRose
#4
Chapter 1: are you taking beta requests?
ddeokbxkkii
#5
Author & Link : ddeokbxkkii https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/6663
Story Title & Link : Inhumane (will PM you for google docs)
Rated M : No
Type : Chaptered
Status : Ongoing
Subscribed.

+ So, I need opinions and thoughts as a reader on the first few chapters, there are like six. Because it's a build up and I want to know if the characters are okay and real. And as a reader, did you see any plot holes.

and bc you said i can. here’s for a completed story:

Author & Link : ddeokbxkkii https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/6663
Story Title & Link : From A Distance https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1355558/from-a-distances
Rated M : No
Type : Chaptered
Status : Completed
Subscribed.

+ for this, i really want a reader to tell me what they think. i will be rewriting this in a limited third pov manner and i’ve chosen mark’s character so tell me if it’s a good choice?
Izarakovic
#6
Hello ^^ I would like some insight about my ongoing fic, if that's okay with you ^^
I don't know if I do this right but if I don't, please tell me ^^

Author & Link : Izarakovic; https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1833197
Story title & Link : Strays; https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1386129/strays
Is it rate M? : Yes, for (chapter 5 and 10) and ual assault (chapter 5)
Type : Chaptered
Completion : Ongoing
How many chapter to review : all published chapter
Any question or specific things : none
Have you subscribed : Yes
Anything else : nothing! Just know that I'm really grateful if you accept my request and thank you for reviewing! Good luck in life and have a nice year ^^