Chapter 1: Aww... that’s cute. Do we have couple name from them already? I hope you’ll do more of them :)
Anything with yuna in it.. they’re both my 1st and 2nd bias of this group
Chapter 1: This is so short, but so good???? First of all, I really liked the vibe your writing established. There was a serene sense of solitude throughout the entire chapter that allowed some subtle aspects of Yuna's feelings to be shown very nicely. Besides that, I love the fact that Yeji was very selfconscious about the possible consequences of Yuna's crush on her, and how they didn't get together (at least not in an explicit way). You didn't make it seem like it's perfectly fine and riskless for ggroup members to date each other, which, understandably, most writers do. It was refreshing and fun. Thank you. Id love to read more though hahahah.
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