Chapter 1

Beautiful Stranger
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You saw him staring at you from across the room. You couldn’t help but make eye contact with this cute stranger. You question if you should go up to him or not. When you finally muster the courage to do so, you notice he’s already making his way towards you.

“Hi,” the beautiful stranger tells you. “My name is Jonghun. It’s a pleasure to meet you.” He firmly shakes your hand.

Suddenly feeling more anxious than before, you forget to let go. You stare into his eyes as you manage to stutter, “H-hi. I’m Al.” You’re now squeezing his hands very firmly.

"Al? Is it short for something,” he asks, smiling at your obvious nervousness.

“Alandia,” you reply shyly, still gripping his long, slender fingers.

“Well, Alandia,” he says, “I think you’re going to break my hand.”

“Um, just call me Al,” you request as you finally release him.

The two of you sit in silence for a while, until he finally breaks the ice again.
Fanning himself, he asks if you want to go somewhere less crowded. You nod your head a bit harder than normal.

Jonghun leads you to the basement of the club. It’s very secluded and very quiet.

“How did you know about this place?” you ask him. “It seems like no one’s been here for ages.”

He laughs lightly as he plays with his hair. The two of you stand in silence yet again. Finally, he responds, “I have my ways.”

His mysteriousness begins to scare you, but in a good way. Yo

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everybodycoffeeshop
#1
Wahhhh I didn't even know this was featured!!! I didn't even get to screencap it LOL. I was wondering why this super old story was so popular now haha
Thanks to all who commented :)
TanMoon
#2
Chapter 1: this is really good but why too short?
mars2611
#3
Congratulations! :)
typewriter98
#4
congrats xD
Bookworm01
#5
Hi. I like the name you used, Alandia. It sounds like some kind of faraway land though I'm not entirely sure where that is or what it is. I know it's your friend so anyway, congrats to the both of you, I guess! One, for her parents' creative minds for thinking up such a wonderful name and two, your beautiful story. :-)
Hope you write more!
someday_
#6
Congrats!! :D
BarbieTiffany
#7
Congratulations on being randomly featured! :)
Triple-Key
#8
Chapter 1: Oh yeahhh I remember this story, I thought the ending was so ... Woww! I reckon the best ones are ones that are really short, and if you manage to pull out some emotions from me ... Then yeah, nice!!
-katya #9
what? nooo, what happens next? you can't leave me here like this nooooooo D;
*dying whale noise*
the-one
#10
This.. You should write mooooooorre!