Love fight

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Description

 Yongsun was tired at the end of the day but got home to find an angry Byulyi. 

Foreword

 This is my first time posting my writing public. English is not my native language so forgive me if there is any mistakes. Please feel free to leave a comment.

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sadandlonely #1
Chapter 1: Jajajaja love that happy ending
chonganna #2
Chapter 1: This was really nice
Abcd17 #3
Chapter 1: It was so good
byulieeeheartt #4
Chapter 1: Another great story from you ❤
The first one I've read was "If only", it was painful af. You bring all my emotions out authornim. Painful but lovely. Thank you ❤
probsolve6 #5
Chapter 2: awww this is great!
Taitai84 1212 streak #6
Chapter 1: The ending was funny~

It's good how you can swing the reader's sympathy from yongsun to moonbyul by sharing more of what happened through third parties, and it's done so deftly that the reader don't feel like information was purposely withheld.
jaytee15 #7
Chapter 1: This is sooooo good!! It makes my heart hurt imagining being yongsun when the maknaes scold her haha thank you so much for this good fanfic. Im looking forward to reading fanfics from you again:)
Bitheway #8
Chapter 2: I really like the way this is going...this would be nice if it would be longer chapters subsequently.. a long read, when the story with this good start, makes you want to read more of it! :)
Twinkle30 #9
Chapter 2: Hey authornim I think you are right, you are actually not good at writing...... Because you are GREAT!!!! Looking forward to your writings authornim <3
jwy0609 #10
Chapter 2: Hey I think 3000words is medium length. I usually write a one shot around 1000words but it's somehow short lol. Anyway hit me up if you need beta readers ^^
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