Almost paradise/ a Sequel to “A Picnic in Paradise” and “A sight of Paradise”

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This story is a Sequel to “A Picnic in Paradise” and “A sight of Paradise”

✧✦➳ comedy➳fluff


 

 

 ❀☼☆ Almost Paradise  ❀☼☆

 

 

 

 

Five years later, when Kyungsoo and Jongin were leaving their flat to work, a girl was standing before their door. Holding a bag and a message. “I’m going to my honeymoon, keep Seon safe.. Yoona.”

Kyungsoo looked at Jongin. 

Jongin looked at Kyungsoo. 

“She is your daughter!!” Kyungsoo whispered to his boyfriend.

“I guess!” He whispered, “Yoona didn’t let me see her for the last three years! She was in Taiwan you know!” He said with a low tone, then, he looked at the girl and smiled awkwardly. “H-hello!”

 “Which one is my father?” She asked.

“Me.” Jongin gulped.

“I remember you.” She smiled and peeked through the flat, “will I stay here! Or with my grandparents?”

“Yo—“ Jongin had been interrupted by Kyungsoo.

“Of course you will stay here with your father! You little pretty girl!” He caressed her hair.

She smiled.

Jongin blinked in surprise.

Kyungsoo hesitated before cheering up. “Great!” He looked at Jongin. “Umm, okay! I gotta go.”

“What? Wait! I have to go to work too!!” 

“She is your daughter,” Kyungsoo grinned, “see you.” He caressed the girl’s hair and walked out.

Jongin blinked in disbelief as he saw his boyfriend leaving him alone with the girl; his daughter.

He sighed and took his phone from his pocket, he called Yoona, but her phone was off. He looked at Seon and bent over. “When did your mother get married?”

She was holding a brown stuffed bear. “Two days ago.” She seemed scared of him.

He sighed again and held her shoulder. “Come on, you are welcome here.” He said with a worried smile.

She stood by the door and shook her head. “I don’t want to get in.”

“What? Why?”

“I don’t want to.” She stomped her feet on the ground.

“But—“

“I’ve changed my mind, I want to go to mom.”

“Your mother isn’t here!” Said Jongin.

“I want my mom.” She pouted.

“Ah, okay! We will call her, just come in.” He opened the door. 

“No.” She insisted.

Jongin sighed and took his phone to call Kyungsoo.

Kyungsoo answered. “What?”

“Kyungsoo, she doesn’t want to enter the apartment!”

“Why?”’

He looked at her. then turned around. “She wants Yoona!”

“Try to convince her! Buy her some candy.”

“She—“ he looked back over his shoulder, “damn! She left!!”

“Jongin!!! Find her.”

Jongin whined. “Kyungsoo, come on, please,” he looked around, “I think she used the elevator!!”

“Jongin!!! Uhhh, okay! I’m coming.”

“Please. Hurry up, my Love.”

“Fine.” Kyungsoo exhaled.

Once he arrived, he saw Jongin sitting on the platform with her, she was crying. 

When Jongin saw Kyungsoo, his lips turned down. “Love, help me.”

Kyungsoo sighed and bent over, he patted her hair. “Why are you crying?”

“I want mommy.” She sobbed.

“She will be back soon, I promise.” He said.

“When?” She sniffled back her tears.

“A week I think, but guess what?”

She stopped crying.

“We will go to the wonderland, and buy sugar candy for you.”

She smiled. “Really?”

“Yes! We will go today.” Kyungsoo smiled, he glanced at Jongin and frowned. He asked her. “Do you want ice cream? Because I want to buy one for myself.”

She stood up. “Yes!”

Jongin pressed his lips and was about to follow them, but Kyungsoo stopped him. “You take her luggage to the apartment, we will be back.” Kyungsoo held her hand and left with her.

Jongin looked at them in disbelief, she was smiling happily and holding his boyfriend’s hand.

“What the heck!!” He sulked and went upstairs to their apartment, he dragged her back and closed the door. He went to the window and tried to locate them. He saw them crossing the street, she seemed happy! He pouted.

Once they had came back, Jongin was wearing his sweater and sweatpants. He asked with his hands in his pocket. “Where is my ice cream?”

“Oh! I didn’t buy one for you!” Said Kyungsoo.

Jongin sulked. He looked at her, there was some ice cream on the corner of , he said. “There is an ice cream on you mouth.”

Kyungsoo shook his head. “You should wipe it for her! Not telling her that!” He took a white napkin off his pocket and wiped ; gently. 

She grinned at him. “I wish you were my father.”

Jongin scolded her. “I’m your Father! Don’t say this!”

She looked at Kyungsoo and held his hand. “Take me to the wonderland.”

“Now!”

“Yesss.” She jumped, “yes, yes, now.”

Kyungsoo checked the time, he sighed and nodded. “Okay! Let’s go.”

“I don’t want to go.” Said Jongin.

“No one asked you to come along.” Kyungsoo giggled.

She laughed and embraced his thigh.

Jongin frowned. 

Kyungsoo put her on the couch. “Let me change my clothes, okay! I will be back.”

She nodded cheerfully.

Jongin followed him to their bedroom. “She isn’t polite!”

“She is a kid, Jongin.” Said Kyungsoo while changing his clothes. 

Jongin pouted. “When will you be back!”

“I don’t know!” He buttoned his shirt.

Jongin exhaled. He rolled his eyes. “I’ll go back to sleep.”

Kyungsoo fixed his hair. “Good idea!” He grinned and kissed Jongin’s cheek. “See you.”

 

 

 

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Kyungsoo came back at 4 o’clock, Jongin was extremely frustrated. The little girl was happy and her mo

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connietorres11 #1
Chapter 85: Midnight Rain /Adoptive brother:
My beloved Queen-Gee, sorry for my late comments. This is a great love story that started with Jongin's hatred for his adopted brother Kyungsoo. His dad's bringing Kyungsoo home at a time Jongin is still hurt by the death of his mom, made Jongin vent his anger to Kyungsoo. Luckily Kyungsoo has a good heart that he tried to understand what Jongin is going through. But there was a time when he stood up against Jongin when he mentioned to Minho that Kyungsoo's mother is a , Kyungsoo stood up against Jongin saying: "his mother was a and she's dead" and thismade Jongin felt guilty even if he doesn't want to let his friends see it.Kyungsoo is so kind and he loved his adoptive father so much that's why he's just bearing whatever Jongin's rudeness against him. From the start, I had a feeling that Jongin's hatred for Kyungsoo will turn to deep love for him.
When that time comes and they're so deeply in love already,Jongin's dad found out about it and he wants Jongin out of the house. Because of his love for Jongin,he thought that by reverse of his adoption they won't be brothers anymore. After finding his real father and doing whatever is necessary the reverse of his adoption is successfully done and they had to face Jongin's dad together and luckily their relationship was accepted by Jongin's dad. My dear Queen-Gee, you have done it again.It's another one of your masterpieces. That reverse of Kyungsoo's adoption is the twist in the story for me. As always, I love the story and it's worth the wait.You are really the best my beloved Queen-Gee. Thank you for giving us the chance to read your story. I'm really happy that I saw you have a new one for us again. Love you lots and do take care of yourself okay. Just don't forget, whatever they say,for me you're not one of the best but the best author there is. Again, lots of love my Queen-Gee. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
siemprekaisoo
#2
Chapter 85: Another great read, my friend!!! I loved how Soo especially stood up to Jong in one scene & how his lovely & kind personality won over Jong's heart eventually. Although understandable for them to be together without issues, it's still sad though that Soo had to reverse the adoption but luckily, it all resolved itself at the end. I love how you think of all these details which is why your stories are extra special!!! Can't wait to read your new creation!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Sandybilly
#3
Chapter 85: What a beautiful ending for a great story ❤️❤️❤️
BabygirlXD #4
Chapter 85: Another amazing story 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Bakmymy
#5
Chapter 85: How can you do this? Everything you write is amazing and incredibly beautiful 🤍
Umbrellao #6
Chapter 85: Amazing 🤩
roxy3657
#7
Chapter 85: 😅finally finished it...very good story Gee...made me laugh when Kyungsoo called Jongin daddy and Chanyeol's teasing of Kyungsoo!🤣🤣🤣..can't wait for the fantasy story next!!❤️❤️❤️
Greendo
#8
Chapter 85: Things went for their favor thanks to Kyungsoo, I love it 🥰 I can’t wait for your next update..
LovelyEonnie
#9
Chapter 85: Indeed! Everything will be alright. Im happy they have their happy ending! Thanks dear for sharing! Missed you! ❤️
O-o-smile2me
#10
Chapter 85: You never disappoint me sun-gee🙏🏻this story was so good.. Keep it up..