Chapter 1: This is so, so beautiful. Im a er for moonsun's angst ff and this ones gonna be one of my favs

Chapter 1: Ahh my heart ㅠㅠㅠ good one one author nim. Looking forward for next angst ?

Chapter 1: I'm just gonna add on a couple more of my favourite moments/lines to cjmoo_'s comment, because apparently we think almost exactly alike XD
Btw I also loved that escape artist imagery when I first read it. There's also the part about moonbyul having to bite her lip to override the pain with more pain. And then those lines with yongsun making her head "swim" so she has to grip her sleeves to prevent being "washed away" :O (geez if I actually had these sort of metaphors to analyse in English class, then maybe I would've actually tried paying attention XD).

Also, you must have some genius fingers to have them come up with such brilliant lines hahaha :D Anyway I wanted to add how the sorta slow buildup at the beginning really lets us see how much moonbyul cares for yongsun. You put across how she was really unwilling to take advantage of her in any way. That was really well done too ^^
To end: brilliant job on writing this and thanks for posting!

Chapter 1: Right from the start, the angst radiates from the part in italics. I really like the amount of tiny details in this story, and the way you wrote them. For example, the part where Byul wanted to scream but then she smelled a familiar perfume, shows that she's very familiar with Yongsun (but of course, that's because she's been in love with her since forever). I also like the way you wrote things almost like in a step-by-step manner, making it easy for me to visualise every action the characters are doing. I think writing this in the second-person point of view is just so interesting. I can really imagine myself to be in Byul's shoes that way, making the angst feel even more real and impactful and goes straight to my heart. Also, I like how my five senses are heightened while reading this - being able to smell the perfume and alcohol, feel Yongsun's soft lips... Gosh, I adore this line: 'Because before you know it — before you can stop yourself — the tightly kept answer unwinds from deep inside and slips out from between your teeth like a stellar escape artist.' and I adore the intensity in the paragraph which starts with 'Your love for Yongsun has always suffocated you and breathed life back into you.' (Okay there's just too many parts I adore tbh.) It's so painful seeing Byul getting everything she's ever wanted from Yongsun but throughout the kiss, she was still conscious enough to know that she's actually on the losing end, yet she still continues with it. Gosh, she still comforts Yongsun at the end! I love the line about staccatos and notes, and then later you wrote about Yongsun being the reason Byul's heart sings. I live for the angst here!! Beautifully written story. Thank you for this! :)

Chapter 1: I'm all for angst and your story makes my heart clench in pain ugh. Good job author nim!

Chapter 1: This hits way too close to home wow.
This... wow. I had to take a few minutes after reading this to just let it sink in.
I don't normally go for angst because I'm too soft and tend to prefer fluff or at least happy endings, but I'm glad I read this. This is beautiful even though it hurts. And you did such a good job of conveying their emotions and describing what was going on - it me into the story. Instead of just reading about what was happening I was experiencing it and that isn't easy to do.
Thank for sharing this, I really enjoyed it :)

Chapter 1: I know they are best friend...and i know how deep moonbyul fall for yongsun...but i'm not sure about yongsun side..in real life...

Chapter 1: Oh god that's broke me ;-; byul really sacrifices herself for yong... Please author will you write sequel i hope?

Chapter 1: Wow... this broke my heart but in a beautiful way. I must be a msochist because i love a good angst. Of course, if it builds up to a happy ending, its better but this is beautoful in its own right. Sometimes life doesnt go the way u want after all. Thanjs for sharing