Beautiful Target

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Falling for her was a complete accident.

While tricking floor plans out of an executive architect, top notch assassin Lee Joon let his heart get involved, and then was forced to end the relationship. Now, the Boss, deciding that the girl knew too much, has given Joon a new target: his ex-girlfriend, Ahn Ailee.

Foreword

 

Hello! It's me, the author of Crazy Beautiful and umm a few 2min stories. 

This is my version of the "This Is War" music video by MBLAQ. Truthfully, I did NOT like the girl in the video at all. The ending really bothered me, and I was basically shouting "just shoot her already" the whole time. Anywaysss, so I'm going to do my best to justify her actions and basically the actions of everyone else. 

 

 

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ProudPrimX3 #1
Chapter 5: P.S PLEEEEAAAASE DO AN ALTERNATE ENDING WHERE THE STUPID GIRL GETS SHOT EH? ;D
ProudPrimX3 #2
Chapter 5: Puahahahaha XD
I loved the story ;D
But the girl in the MV was stupid. Hate her TT^TT
HOW CAN SHE ABANDON JOONIE LIKE THAT? HE SAVED HER LITTLE LIFE....ARGHHH
chocolat748 #3
Chapter 5: Wow, I seriously loved your fic! :) I really REALLY hated the girl in the mv (how could she leave Joonie just like that T.T) and wanted to smack her ahaha. xD That said, I applaud your effort to make her more likeable. While I still hate her, I think your plot made me understand her a bit more and my hate for her to lessen (just a little) - I still made cutting comments in my mind during the last chapters when she thinks about why Joon would kill himself and stuff though. This piece was really well-written, and I enjoyed reading it even when I didn't like the main character, and that's saying a lot. :D I'll be reading your other fics for sure. <3 Sorry for the long comment!

P.S. Would you be willing to do an alternate ending that strays from the mv? In which, as you put it, Joon shoots the girl and elopes with Thunder? ;)
Always #4
Chapter 5: I really loved it. Especially the part where you said "I still wish Joon had shot the girl, and then eloped with Thunder." ♥
iamamonkey124 #5
Loved this fanfic soooo much <3
Its amazinggg!! :)
BananasForJae #6
Aww this was really good! But I can't help but wish you changed the ending so Joon ended up with the girl... I didn't like her either in the music video but for some reason... I really wanted them to end up together.
LOLOL I swear my eyes were O.O when I read "I still wish Joon had shot the girl, and then eloped with Thunder."
hime-chan #7
This story is fantastic and touching, but I nearly peed my pants at the "I still wish Joon had shot the girl, and then eloped with Thunder."
Kula4everalone #8
I can't wait to read The NeXT chapt >,< and I couldn't agree More with you about hating The music video's girl I personally despise her !!
faerie2010 #9
This was really goo, but I wish there was more to the end.
summerxblessings #10
Love love love the story <33333
///has a spazz attack///
This site seriously needs more mblaq fics... ><
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