Chapter 1: Although I'm not familiar with your other fics, I have to say even though this style of writing is "new" for you, it's actually what hooks me and interests me into a fic. It got me reading until the end and unlike some writing styles, it didn't make me skim through and I even went back up to reread some sentences a few times.
I like that this was told through Chanyeol's POV too because it seems much more personal an in-depth to Chanyeol's feelings and thought processes.
I can't blame Kyungsoo here because he is but a victim. Chanyeol on the other hand though does seem like he has an issue with possessiveness and manipulation. Even though he is my bias, I wouldn't really want to approach him if he was as you written him here xD Scary
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