Prologue

Shooting Into Your Heart

 

“Put your hands up in the air!” Jongin shouted as he steadily pointed his gun at the man. He felt his sweat dripping down from under his police hat, but resisted the urge to wipe it away. The masked man, however, continued to clutch onto the bag of money, looking around cautiously. This was the fifth time that the corner convenience store had been raided, and Jongin was not about to let it happen again. This time, he would catch him. This time, there would be no more risks. The man took a step, and Jongin immediately fired.

The loud echo of the gunshot was heard throughout the area. He slowly walked towards the culprit, still targeting him with the weapon. As he got closer, his complexion became pale. He quickly looked up, and saw the man dressed in black running away in the distance. Panic started to set in. Lying still in front of him was a young man dressed in a blood-stained white t-shirt with blue jeans. His bag of groceries lay beside him, its contents scattered everywhere. Jongin located the wound and pulled out a handkerchief, trying to stop the bleeding. With his right hand, he pulled out his walkie-talkie.

“Code 54-7, victim is shot. Cheongdam 2, Gangnam District. Please send an ambulance as soon as possible.” he spoke calmly, despite breathing hard. He placed his free hand and continued to hold the blood down. Jongin bowed his head down and prayed for the innocent passerby to be fine as he heard the sirens in the distance coming closer.

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buttcheeksdesu
Sorry! I don't know if anyone is still here, but if you are, I'm so sorry! It seems like I'll be uploading one chapter every year...I pretty much forgot about this. I didn't upload a full chapter because I feel extremely rusty about my writing and wanted to ease into it.

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blackcatz #1
Chapter 5: Plot twist - kyungsoo is the killer!
_chanchan #2
Chapter 5: OMG YOU’RE BACK AAAHHHH
ficfan
#3
Chapter 3: Awhhh they’re cute ^^
I’m intrigued about the psycho killer, I want to know how he’ll fit into the storyline more. I’m just hoping he doesn’t try to come back to kill Kyungsoo off or something (if ofc he is the man who had robbed the convenience store) some unsubs are crazy like that. Also, before I forget to mention it, you’re writing is really smooth and easy to read, you build-up a story well - I’m looking forward to the next update, but take your time ^^
ficfan
#4
Chapter 2: I started reading this because the idea was so pure and posed so simply in the prologue and I just had to stop here to say I love Kyungsoo’s character already (“Also, you’re an .” killed me XD). Okay sorry I’ll keep reading haha
sparkl3ysparx
#5
Chapter 2: Naughty Soo amd the scared rabbit.
may73084 #6
Chapter 2: Sounds like itll be an interesting ride ;)
Monicasaputra
#7
Chapter 1: Need ur update soon
hellyuno
#8
Chapter 1: Oh I'm so excited for this! I hope you'll update fastˊ▽ˋ