Tokyo Gothic

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It hurt. The pain of betrayal consumed his whole body and rattled his bones until every breath meant choking on a silent wail pleading for the end to come.

Kyungsoo ached, and it made him weak. Oh, so weak.

Too weak to stay away from the temptation of strong arms which held him prisoner against a tight embrace that threatened to mend all his broken pieces together behind closed doors.

Too weak to hold back soft lips from murmuring sweet nothings against his own. Too drunk on the fire burning within his core at a single graze of fingertips across his skin, setting ablaze to the dark in which he they hid.

Too weak to say goodbye to his partner waiting back home as well. 

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Foreword

AN: This is my first time in a long time trying to write a story again. I've had this idea for a while now and I hope to actually finish this whole story. 

Disclaimer: I am really new at writing and I'm still improving and have a long way to go but hopefully this story turns out alright in the end. Thanks so much for reading :)

 

 

P.S: This story is cross posted on Wattpad

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Imthealex
I swear this is a Kaisoo story but this chapter sort of happened lmao.
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oeschinen #1
Chapter 4: Damn, that hurts, but Hyunsik's words was nothing but the truth. It may be a hard pill to swallow but I hope Kyungsoo realizes he does deserve better. It's never easy. As someone who has been in Kyungsoo's shoes, I know how that feels like TT_TT You just want to leave but your heart still melts around them.
This was well written that I could almost feel how it felt like and "abandoned" despite still seeing each other everyday.
SpeckeledPanda #2
Chapter 4: I am so conflictedddddd Dx chanyeol is such a but I think he genuinely has feelings for kyungsoo still, despite cheating on him. And it pisses me off that I find their interactions at the end of the chaper cute because Chanyeol's a cheaterrrrr and needs to goooo. And Hyunsik, I think that having him make an appearance was a great addition! I'm highkey hoping that he returns at some point in the future as a friend for Kyungsoo and someone that Kyungsoo can confide in (like he did earlier in the chapter) because carrying all that pain on his own is just going to further wear him down. Anyways, awesome chapter! Already anticipating the next one :D
Kyungsue12 #3
I'm ing hate u yeol ...u worthless cheater ... U YEOL
hellyuno #4
Chapter 4: I hope chanyeol chokes from guilt
oeschinen #5
Chapter 3: I love your writing, I have to say, and I can really relate to how Kyungsoo feels with an absent lover where he's often left alone in his thoughts that really aren't so nice. I can feel myself walking through Kyungsoo's shoes in this fic.
Adrfranklin #6
Chapter 3: Why does Soo always have to get hurt
SpeckeledPanda #7
Chapter 3: I love this story so much already omg (although I don't love chanyeol lol, he needs to quit hurting my bby soo). I look forward to every single update cause I just wanna know what happens next :D I can't wait for more kaisoo moments!
olio_beesz #8
Chapter 3: Oh yeah, finally my kaisoo!!! Waiting for their moment.
olio_beesz #9
Chapter 2: Ah my baby. I wish i can be there and hug u Soo. I know it hurt. Its rlly hurts right?
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