Dear Crush

Description

Just starting to write FF related to my fav OTP. Please read and give me your opinion. I love writing but not very good at it. Forgive me for any grammatical error in the story.

Love from Ma^^

Foreword

" Your smile is my everything yet that smile never meant to be mine"  - Lee Chaerin

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minami1826
#1
Chapter 1: I was listening to my current bop (CLC's Bae) while reading this and I caught the exact feeling you are trying to portray the character. It's painful but in a cute way cuz the gee vibe is there. Nice one. ^^
Park_HyeSun #2
Chapter 1: Hello. I did not focus on the grammar errors, but looked to the storyline instead. It could have been more developed. Crushes happen often. It'll be relatable to people. Would have been nice to see her trying to speak to him or something.

In the end, it's just an opinion. Have a good day, (: