Chapter 1: I'm definitely very interested and intrigued by what I've seen of this story so far, can't wait to see what is to come! :)

Chapter 3: Still too early for me to comment anything lol. What can I see is, her mother is a bish. Then, I think I can see where this story is going. And, I hope real hard that Sena is a strong girl and I think she has a secret she kept to herself. Like.. power? Lol great start btw! Can't wait to see more from you <3

Chapter 2: I wish that this chapter was longer. I feel like more information can definitely be stuffed on this chapter and maybe a hint of conflicts that will catch the reader's attention? Also, who's Jieun? Her name on the paragraph right after the "Stop! Don't do it." line.

I think that your writing is pretty good! I like how effectively you describe the movements of the shredded pieces since I know just how challenging it is to create the perfect image and convey them to the readers. My exo info is quite rusty but that guy might be Luhan? It is really cool how he's able to do that but I wish there's more background about Senna ><

Is the child Senna? I wonder if the lady is her mother and that her dad's death might be the cause behind her mother's hostility towards her. My heart aches for Senna because the event must have traumatized her. I suffer the same condition but it's not as severe as Senna's and it is not caused by a traumatic experience--mine is pretty mild actually.

Keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more about Senna and what she's hiding :D

Chapter 1: Okay, it's a little too early for curse words but TF SENA'S MOM. Did something happen that she's behaving that way? Is Senna kinda like a cursed child or something? I can't take Senna's mom behaviour very well and I really hope that someday Senna will get back at her. I know that I'm supposed to hope for her mother to change but I want the mother to get a taste of her own medicine first. Changes can take place after that.

Cashier guy and swing guy are creepy .__. Are they Chanyeol and Sehun? I don't know about anyone but I can totally understand Senna's logic. I won't go to a farther convenient store just because the cashier guy is creepy lol I love my excess fats like that :')))

You mentioned that Senna has her own job and it is mentioned that at the time when Sena is out for a walk, students are in cram schools. I wonder if Senna's working a part-time job? And are her parents unable to afford to pay for cram school fees? There really is something more to be discovered about Senna and I'm interested to know more!

For a while I thought that it was soulmate!au due to the mention of colours hahahaha. I really love the "All she wanted was something real, something that is terrifying to the touch, but far too beautiful to let go" line because it really is beautifully worded.

Chapter 2: I wonder where this man is taking her and who he is, also why everytime the cashier boy and she touched, it was weird. It's really interesting! ^^