Stage 1

Inner Locket
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Stage 1: Fright

 

 

“Senna, can you go out and buy some milk?” The lady said more as a command than a question. Her back didn’t even turn around to speak those words to her face. She knew the girl was standing in the living room. Then again, Senna just arrived home, removed her shoes, and closed the door just loud enough that her mother heard her.

 

With no complaints, the girl answered a soft-spoken okay and shoved her feet back into her worn out sneakers. Her hands unconsciously skimmed the small locket-shaped necklace wrapped around her neck. The door closed behind her as she dragged her feet against the pavement.

 

It wasn’t unusual for her mother to ask her to do errands. That’s what a daughter was for. She didn’t even bother walking up to her mother for some cash. She knew from previous events that it would never end in her favor. Her mother’s words were almost identically recited the same out of the four times she asked for money: ‘You have a job and money, use that.’

 

Senna couldn’t retort back as she did live under her parents household for free. It was the least she could splurge out. Sometimes it was rather too much. Her mother asked her to purchase soju for her gathering when she should know well enough that her daughter wasn’t even close to drinking age. The only thing she would get is a boot out of the store.

 

The walk to the convenience store was short. Her hands grabbed a carton of milk and a strawberry lollipop at the front counter as a treat. Senna shared a quick look at the cashier who became familiar with cashing her out. The girl stopped by at least half of the week, and he only worked evening shifts on the weekdays.

 

His hair color changed from two days ago; a warm red replaced a natural black. His eyes changed swiftly from a light brown to a darker shade. She placed the items on the counter and rubbed her eyes. They acted up again , and she felt uneasy seeing the fuzzy change not due to a bending of light.

 

The unusual incidents have been occurring recently these past two weeks, and she was not a fan. From the corner of her eyes, she caught ahold of his deep stare. His eyes felt like lasers penetrating her fair skin. Her skin felt the temperature rise underneath her black rain jacket. She formed and brought a fist up to and feigned a cough, however, he was still fixated on her amidst scanning her purchase.

 

The girl couldn’t deal with the uncomfortable pressure. “What’s the total?”

 

His eyes moved to look at the cash register and she felt less stuffy in the store.

 

“The total comes up to be $3.75.”

 

His fingers grazed the knuckles of her hand as Senna handed him a ten dollar bill. Her teeth clenched softly on her tongue, feeling the static linger on her skin. The corner of his lips slightly uplifted.

 

“Change is $6.25 miss. Have a safe trip.” The smile stayed there, but she knew it wasn’t simple. There is something in the undertone of his voice and expression that brought uneasiness.

 

This wasn’t the first time the boy did this to Senna. She remembered the first time they met for some reason. It was weird that he gasped and appeared shocked when they accidently touched. He let out a soft, but audible gasp and retracted his hand back as if she was contagious. After that day he constantly repeated the gesture, but the heat has been exceptionally warmer. And he keeps it there longer, as if to mock her o

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FindingFantasy
#1
Chapter 1: I'm definitely very interested and intrigued by what I've seen of this story so far, can't wait to see what is to come! :)
mymaiee #2
Chapter 3: Still too early for me to comment anything lol. What can I see is, her mother is a bish. Then, I think I can see where this story is going. And, I hope real hard that Sena is a strong girl and I think she has a secret she kept to herself. Like.. power? Lol great start btw! Can't wait to see more from you <3
itsatale
#3
Chapter 2: I wish that this chapter was longer. I feel like more information can definitely be stuffed on this chapter and maybe a hint of conflicts that will catch the reader's attention? Also, who's Jieun? Her name on the paragraph right after the "Stop! Don't do it." line.

I think that your writing is pretty good! I like how effectively you describe the movements of the shredded pieces since I know just how challenging it is to create the perfect image and convey them to the readers. My exo info is quite rusty but that guy might be Luhan? It is really cool how he's able to do that but I wish there's more background about Senna ><

Is the child Senna? I wonder if the lady is her mother and that her dad's death might be the cause behind her mother's hostility towards her. My heart aches for Senna because the event must have traumatized her. I suffer the same condition but it's not as severe as Senna's and it is not caused by a traumatic experience--mine is pretty mild actually.

Keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more about Senna and what she's hiding :D
itsatale
#4
Chapter 1: Okay, it's a little too early for curse words but TF SENA'S MOM. Did something happen that she's behaving that way? Is Senna kinda like a cursed child or something? I can't take Senna's mom behaviour very well and I really hope that someday Senna will get back at her. I know that I'm supposed to hope for her mother to change but I want the mother to get a taste of her own medicine first. Changes can take place after that.

Cashier guy and swing guy are creepy .__. Are they Chanyeol and Sehun? I don't know about anyone but I can totally understand Senna's logic. I won't go to a farther convenient store just because the cashier guy is creepy lol I love my excess fats like that :')))

You mentioned that Senna has her own job and it is mentioned that at the time when Sena is out for a walk, students are in cram schools. I wonder if Senna's working a part-time job? And are her parents unable to afford to pay for cram school fees? There really is something more to be discovered about Senna and I'm interested to know more!
itsatale
#5
For a while I thought that it was soulmate!au due to the mention of colours hahahaha. I really love the "All she wanted was something real, something that is terrifying to the touch, but far too beautiful to let go" line because it really is beautifully worded.
Rsamara
#6
Chapter 2: I wonder where this man is taking her and who he is, also why everytime the cashier boy and she touched, it was weird. It's really interesting! ^^