Being in Love With You, Hurts

Description

This story is about two best friends who are in denial that they are in love with each other. Their friends see the truth that they try to hide but their band of friends are trying their best to get them to see the light.

Foreword

Love. What is this feeling? Is it a great feeling? Joyous? Refreshing? Invigorating? Painful? Why? Tell me why. Why do I feel this way about you? I can't have these feelings, ever. Not for you, Park Yoochun. When did this happen? Do you feel the same for me? Why? Why am I so in love with you? Why? Tell me.......why? Why does this hurt so much? Being in love with you, hurts. Hurts....so.....bad. 

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Teneky 701 streak #1
Chapter 1: It has potential, that's for sure, and I like the concept of it, but just a bit more improvement on the conversation part. It was a bit confusing there, but no worries. A bit more practice and you got this! 💗😍
yovinafrd #2
Chapter 1: no it is actually so good! I feel the love♥♥ but if i could give you some advice, the dialogue quite confusing. When the dialogue part i kind of asking "who said this? Is it Mina or Yoochun?" I usually wrote 'Mina said or Yoochun said' at the last part after the dialogue....hehehe i can't wait for the next chapter. Work hard, ne? Fighting!
dbskfan09 #3
is this story really that bad? If it is, please tell me and I will rewrite it and make it a lot better then it is now.
dbskfan09 #4
Hello everyone. It's been a while. I hope that everyone gets a chance to read all of the stories that I have posted!!
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