Hello! Thank you all for your comments and feedback! Also, sorry for all the confusion as i didn't indicate the POV properly. Each portion of the story is bringing us to different time period of Yunho's life or his relationship with Jaejoong (which is indicated in the age of Yunho). Just a summary, Yunho and Jaejoong are very much in love but they are siblings thus the secrecy and problems (Jaejoong wanting to do what's 'right') in their relationship. However, Jaejoong realised their relationship is taking a toll on Yunho's rs with their dad thus she decided to marry someone else (though she still cares for him as seen in the last chap). For Yunho, he has never once given up hope on being in a rs with his sister. His death in the last chapter is accidental as he wanted to make a change in his life though he was feeling depressed but due to substance abuse, his life was cut short.

Maybe you should have put the character death warning at the start of the story and not just at the beginning of the chapter. Also you should have tagged this story as onesided, and as jae with someone else so as not to be confused as to be a story about yunjae when in fact its a story of yunho loving and chasing after jaejoong who is married to another and is not really in love with Yunho. Sort of.

Chapter 8: Well i read this in one go. And you made me cry like a baby, this is beautiful and complex. I can't avoid resenting his father, he was never a real father to him, thinking that he would find more comfort from a doctor... I felt that he blame everything on himself, he adored Jaejoong, loved his stepmother even his father. Jaejoong's sorrow is part of her own selfishness and cowardize but I hate that I can't fault her. I don't know if it's cazy but I thought she wasn't pregnant of Jaewon. Well I think the only one trying was the stepmother and his friend, but given his pain, I was kind of dreading his death. Thanks for this.

Chapter 8: So jaejoong and yunho are related
Jaejoomg is married and has a child with her husband
Yunho dies is that right ?
I'm confused
Are you able to put in expjaination

Chapter 8: What just happened?

Chapter 7: Yunhooooo aisshhh i wonder what will happen next :(

Chapter 7: I think yunho will seriously hurt in this game.

I like your story. It's very different. I worry about Yunho though.

Chapter 5: Is the child Yunho's or her husband's? Waaah can't wait for the next update!

Chapter 3: So they are really siblings,she isn't his stepsister, is she? She really loves him,doesn't she? Can't wait to read more to see what really happened.