ocean eyes

Sad Girl: Short Pieces for Short-Term Feelings
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I'm drowning in your gaze

my words caught on choked ends

 

because

 

It's not fair when you

hold out a buoy 

only to watch me struggle.

 

I'm swimming in

your ocean eyes

 

 

holding on against

your unmerciful waves

 

and like a tide

you push me out

only to pull me back in again.

 

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jinsomniac #1
Chapter 19: : (
jinsomniac #2
Chapter 16: okay, i know i said i was going to binge-read this last night? two nights ago? i don’t know but i passed out.

i definitely don’t regret taking the time to read your poems this morning. all of this was just amazing - lots of your poems just rendered me speechless because wow, i relate.

to be honest, i aspire to be a poet but i just have no idea where to start, how to start, and all that jazz. what i do know is that you’re an amazing poet and even though this collection was a short 15 chapters, there wasn’t a single moment where i would think twice about going to the next poem.

thank you for this, juliyah!
jinsomniac #3
Chapter 1: wow, first chapter and you’ve already got me hooked. guess who’s going to be binge reading this tonight? :' )
Banghimlo #4
Chapter 16: Yes,let it all go.
Let it go~ Let it go~
*hide my face* I had to XD
I love your poems and this is my first time receiving a love letter from an author. :D
Banghimlo #5
Chapter 15: <3
Banghimlo #6
Chapter 14: Can I just hug you? *hugs*
Banghimlo #7
Chapter 12: <3 This so deep and beautiful~
Banghimlo #8
Chapter 11: Awww that's nice of you!! ^^
Can you give an example?
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