Chapter 1: Wow I could hear the classical music on the background as I was reading your story.

Chapter 1: omfg i am so amazed by you... im srsly speechless coz i don't think i could ever formulate words to express how entranced i was by this... you are a smart person with varied interests and how you write a lot of stories with various themes and manage to go in deep even, im really really amazed...

i love how well versed they both are, enabling them to start their conversations with mini book reviews and exchange of opinions, that their relationship developed as they were doing it... turns out despite Yifan's dumb actions and uncalled for dumbness at times, he still got Jun's attention... Sehun does deserve that gift, coz who knows until how long Yifan would've been staring at Jun from afar with Jongdae constantly jeering at him for how hopeless he is with his crush

another thing i love abt this is how you associated their relationship development with the changing of the seasons!!! i've always wanted a fic like this, i think seasons are lovely metaphors for love/feelings so this having that touch still worked wonders for me

i promise i still have a lot to say, but i can't find the right words tbh, i love how Jun was straightforward with his feelings and actions, as it was always Yifan who couldn't believe how he's come to that point with Jun already, i love how Jun calls Yifan to read him poetry when he can't sleep, how Yifan was immediately introduced to Jun's friends as the person Jun's dating and how he's introduced the other to his parents, i loved it when Yifan first said those 3 magic words... and that moment in the library where Yifan was reading TLP in French and Jun was translating it in another languyas he knows the book by heart, that really struck me... my fave part of this...

AHHHHH IM JUST SO IN LOVE WITH THIS!!! *seryoso, bakit ang galing mo??? :)))* and i don't think my words are enough to express this, but just know that i sincerely love this!

i love you and your wonderful krisho stories so much! thank you for this one!

Chapter 1: Really, it was so mellow that in the middle, I thought the ending would be Joonmyeon is dying and all that cliche stuff.
You mention all these awesome authors and great books and I was like, yeah, you don't read those so move along.
All I can read is angst lately (hence the expected sad ending) but I like this cuz you take it slowly and it is not too fluff-y (which I would just skim it thru).
Thank you, author-nim. Your writing is awesome! (I would love to read KrisHo angst from you)

Chapter 1: OMG OMG OMG.
It was so good, I mean just look from the title. It was something that I'm willing to read. And something that I really wish wld happen to me irl (LOL).

Actually I really fell in love with this:
Yifan had so much metaphors readied on his mind and it seemed like he could write odes to Junmyeon until he realized he couldn't, because even pages and pages of fitting adjectives and hundreds upon hundreds of allegories won't be enough to describe Kim Junmyeon.

OMG! Kim Junmyeon you were the lucky one. Yifan, you're so whipped!

And I'm thankful for putting those references (I have to admit, it's rare to find ff with literature references and I'm happy to read this one with my fave pair). I'm a geek-nerd really.

Thank you for writing. Love it soooo much. <3
(Actually I've written the same comment in your ao3, I hope you won't get bored reading mine :)).

Chapter 2: Awwn Krisho <3, Thanks for this, is really sweet and beautiful...love your writing style. And yeah Sehunnie really deserves something xD

Chapter 1: this is so good! Yifan really need to buy sehun something lol. Seriously yifan is such a creep in here but its okay as long as he got joonmyeon as his boyfriend. Creep or not he is still hot haha. Joonmyeon is kinda snarky, gave yifan a book as a bday gift so yifan could read to him until he fell asleep kk.

Chapter 1: Beautiful does not even fit the style of your writing, it's beyond than that. This is the kind of writing style I am looking for. Oh my gosh. You made their roles as if they were real. Thank you for this story! Keep on writing!
Btw, thanks for giving tons of readings, gonna buy those online or in booksale.

Hello! I can't wait for sassy Jongdae, good luck with your writing.

Auuuuuu
Cheers for Krisho!!
Interesting, so Yifan is the first one to fall in love I guess?